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Reviewer: mowza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2022 6:40 AM Title: Pillow Talk

Just wanted to say that this is really good so far!

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2018 1:19 PM Title: Pillow Talk

Really great story so far! I love the playful and caring dynamic between the two of them. And great job getting chapters out so fast.

Author's Response:

I was trying to hit that dynamic, glad to hear it landed!  Hearing from the readers that they enjoyed it does help me write, and is the main motivator for getting stuff out so fast.

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2018 7:53 AM Title: Pillow Talk

A nice chapter, though I do hope the meaness/violence remains the stuff of dreams between them.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  And no worries, Sarah finds the idea of intentionally hurting the protagonist abhorrent, no matter how much she jokes about it or what their dreams are.  The dreams are mostly a way of showing a negative "what if" scenario, and for me to write some cruelty and violence without affecting the main story.  

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