[Report This]Date: June 24 2023 6:55 PM Title: The First Visit
Very erotic story and novel idea; I have to admit, I hoped Sam would get digested and he kind of wanted it. I'd like to see more stores revolved around KINKS, whether it's a continuation of Sam, Debbie, Ben, Alice, etc or even other characters. You've set up an interesting locale there.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Well, my writing tends not to involve "people coming to an end" since I feel realistically it would be devastating for the person doing it, in the context of the stories I write anyway. I'm not against it though, as you might see in a couple of my short stories. I do like what KINKS became though, it's a decent world lore to set things up in.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2022 1:52 AM Title: The First Visit
i love the twist
[Report This]Date: April 24 2020 8:44 AM Title: The First Visit
This remains the best story I've ever read. I remember making this account specifically to write a review on it! And now I'm finally writing myself. Are you planning on writing any more stories in the future Gershwin?
Author's Response: I really want to. I have many ideas I want to try, but my job has become more intense and I generally have less time and energy to put into creative stuff. I have multiple drafts of chapters that need finishing but they’re nowhere near the quality I need before releasing them. I have plans in motion that might give me some extra time, but they’re delayed until after this whole covid situation is resolved. I’m sure I will get back to it eventually!
[Report This]Date: October 18 2019 5:39 PM Title: And so...
So, being the 15th person to leave a review, it might seem superfluous to shower you with praise. That said, I really think you stumbled upon a very uniquely fun and erotic method for people playing out their g/t fetishes in terms of world-building. Most of all, you were rigorous about it. I really appreciate your attention to detail in terms of writing both a coherent plot and deft descriptive clarity. You’re a good writer!
While I enjoyed the story in and of itself, it really left me fantasizing about what I would do if a place like that really existed, and that sort of imagination-stoking stuff is what keeps me reading in general, let alone on this particular website. Good work! Cheers!
Author's Response:
I mean, you know, I don't really *mind* being showered with praise :D
Thank you for the comments/review, it always means a lot to get such feedback. I had a lot of fun writing this story, partly due to the freedom it gave to just sort of explore the fetish.
I've not had the time or mental space to do anything creative recently but I do hope to get back into it eventually. I have a half finish mamoth sized chapter of "The Perks of an Amazonian Girlfriend" that needs finishing... for almost a year!
Date: May 04 2019 8:24 PM Title: The Second Visit
I kind of guessed a third of the way through chapter 1 that Samantha was actually Sam's mother, which honestly is, well a turn off. When that was varified at the end of chapter 1, I was reluctant to continue reading this story line.
However, I found your writing and your descriptions very intriguing, so in my mind I looked at Samantha as Sam's Step-Mother. When you wrote that Samantha is in fact Sam's Step-Mother in chapter 2 of your story the fantasy became much more, shall I say acceptable.
In fact, it is reminiscent of "Bill & Ted's Excellent Adventure" with Missy {Amy Stoch} as the stepmom. You never described Samantha / Debbie in too much detail, but Amy Stoch would be a good basis for her. Then again, so would a lot of women now that she has been defined as Sam's stepmother.
This is really quite a great story. You mention the technology, yet not in such as degree the story is bogged down by it. Your foreshadowing is great and leaves the reader guessing. Best of all is your story content, which is top notch.
Please keep this story going.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I’m glad you enjoyed it! I guessed some people could be turned away by the “mother” implications, however I felt if I started with “it’s his step mum” people would just go “Oh I see where that’s going”. I’ll be writing my other stories for a bit, but I’ll come back to these characters one day.
Date: April 21 2019 4:24 PM Title: And so...
Man this was a amazing and hot story indeed really like the ending and really loking forward to sequel with maybe alice more involve or maybe side stories involing others at kinks very good jon 5/5
Author's Response: Happy to hear you enjoyed it, thanks! I do have some ideas on that, but currently writing is not happening much. Busy work and life stuff getting in the way!
[Report This]Date: April 05 2019 9:07 PM Title: The Office
Has this become a forgotten story? :(
Author's Response:
It has not, I have the next chapter out elsewhere already, I'll post it here in a bit.
Date: January 31 2019 1:57 AM Title: The First Visit
Really enjoyed the chapter. The realization at the end was great. Really looking forward to the next one. Now I'm curious if she will tell him, or keep it her secret.
[Report This]Date: January 23 2019 1:10 PM Title: The Second Visit
Noice xD
Date: January 23 2019 2:31 AM Title: The Second Visit
This was my favourite story back when I first read it, really glad it isn't a one off :D
Author's Response: Always happy to hear when someone enjoys my writing. There are two more chapters to go before I call this arc done. I may revisit the characters again after that but not before I write something else.
Date: January 22 2019 11:35 PM Title: The First Visit
Wow, what a fantastic second chapter! Completely worth the wait! I guess we know how the truth of their identity will be known to each other. I'm very curious at what happens after that. Especially since you dropped the Step mom tidbit in there. Will they continue to do things? And I really want to see how the trip outside of kinks goes! The anal insertion at the start was wonderful by the way. Well written and good payoff to the tease of it in chapter one
Hopefully the wait for chapter 3 isn't as long. But it will be worth it if it is.
Author's Response: It was a fun one to write and I’m glad you enjoyed it. The next chapter is a slight change of pace, then I’ll do the final chapter which will be anything and everything.
Date: July 12 2018 3:59 AM Title: The First Visit
Oh it is, that would be the autofix screwing up on my phone, and me not noticing because I was dead tired lol sorry about that
Date: July 12 2018 12:36 AM Title: The First Visit
As a follow-up to my review earlier, what may be cool is if you do a second chapter about a future session, make him a bit smaller, 2-3 inches, that way insertion stuff eouwobe different, mouth play would be doffdiffe, exploration would be different, etc. Could just be a setting that they can put and they made him a bit bigger the first time because he was a newbie. Just good for thought
Author's Response:
It's possible, don't forget "variable size" was mentioned when Sam was reading the options. I may introduce a plot device that allows Samantha to modify his size in real time. Can I guess English isn't your first language? hehe I love "doffdiffe" and "eouwobe", I found my self trying to say them in my head even though knew the word you meant.
[Report This]Date: July 11 2018 4:11 PM Title: The First Visit
I only read half so far, but it is an amazing story! looking forward to butt, I have a feeling there will be something to do with his identity, given the mask. Which I love those types of situations. I hope to see more frome u, great stuff so far in this.
Author's Response:
Happy you enjoyed it. I have a couple of stories on here, I'll be releasing a chapter for one of those before I do any more to this, but given the attention this one got I will come back to it sooner than planned.
[Report This]Date: July 11 2018 7:02 AM Title: The First Visit
WOW. This is, by far, the best erotic story that's been posted on this site for a long time. So well written, with a brilliant premise, and full of great content. Please continue!
Author's Response:
Awesome :D I did try to aim for "erotic" over "story/chacter" this time, seems I succeeded! My other stories have a lot more dialogue and "stuff" between fetish scenes.
Date: July 11 2018 5:19 AM Title: The First Visit
Dude holy crap that was soooo good! Like I usually hate maternal stuff but in your case I ignored it and it was fucking amazing. Reading it made my heart pump so much and wish this type of facility existed and Is probably dump all my money into it. Anyways, looking forward to more! Great job!
Author's Response:
Always great to see such positive responses :D And yeah, that'd be quite the dream come true if that sort of place could really exist.
The maternal theme isn't something I'd usualy write, but it was based loosley on a request. I tried to keep it on the sidelines though, rather than front-and-center. However if I do try and add another part some time, it'll likely have to cover that side again given where the story has gone so far - I'll still try and keep it tasteful though.
Date: July 10 2018 7:37 PM Title: The First Visit
Really loved this, good descrodescr and writing. Ending was almost like something out of the twilight zone. Good stuff, hope there ends up being more
Author's Response:
Thanks :) Well with a positive reception I'm more likely to come back to it than not, so looks promising.
[Report This]Date: July 10 2018 1:05 PM Title: The First Visit
Hot damn this one was good. Love the length!! Also not a vore fan but I loved the giantess butt in it! Also lived the twist at the end! I can’t wait for more!! Please continue and keep it long and detailed! Add more giantess booty too lol
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it :) If I get around to doing a second part, there will indeed more booty!