Date: June 18 2021 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: Familiar
This was definitely one of the best gentle stories I've read in awhile. Fantastic job! I'd love to see this continue, but this was a great end as well. I hope you keep writing!
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. I really do hope to write more in the future, but I can't make any promises.
Date: June 18 2021 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 7: Apology
Great chapter, but had to deduct a star due to no anal play to close things out. Anon already had a ton of pussy fun, but no anal? You'd think Starfire at least would want him to stick his dick up her butt or at least pleasure her rectum from the inside, if Raven wasn't willing!
Understandable. Unfortunately, there was just no good spot for anal. I agree the two of them would be game, but just based on the situation they were all in, it just didn't fit. Raven would be the type to require the perfect circumstances to get her to be bold enough to be honest about her desires and shove Anon up her ass. Starfire would always be done for it, but in this specific situation, she felt like she was on a tightrope, struggling to avoid anything that might scare Raven and Anon off. Anon would be the type to do some exploration there, but like Raven he would need assurances that the experience wouldn't be unpleasant for him.
I could have possibly fit some anal into the chapter, but it was already pushing past 15k so I had to call it. Very sorry I wasn't able to fit it in! Who knows? Maybe I'll include a bonus chapter focused entirely on anal. Jynx seems the type to just go for it, no safety net.
Date: June 16 2021 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Familiar
Amazing, love the gentle yet playful giantess. Thought I have a question will Anon get some interaction with Raven's emoticlones? After all the only thing better than one sexy ass is multiple.
I did consider that. Play around with what each emotion would do to him, based on their respective emotion. But there was nowhere to put it, so sadly no, no emoticlones. I'm glad you enjoyed the story all the same, though!
Date: June 14 2021 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 6: Darkness
Happy to see Anon safe and sound and not up Blackfire's ass. The only booty action he should be getting is from Raven and maybe Stafire if Raven allows it, lol.
Much as I would have loved to see him find his way up her ass, the best thing for everyone (except Blackfire) was that he was rescued in time. Also the chapter was pushing past 10k words already, so it didn't need him to explore another hole.
Date: June 07 2021 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Familiar
Enjoying the story so far! Any chance of some inner-butt fun for Anon at some point? You can tell he WANTS to do Raven's butthole eventually!
And who wouldn't want some butt-interaction with Raven? Can't say if there's any anal in the future, but he'll be up close and personal with her ass sooner rather than later.