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Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2019 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 11

Missing Ashley a lot, hope you havent stopped writing. It is by far the best sstory ever written, Ashley needs lots of more horror to bring to his victims, hehe.

Reviewer: redcars Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2019 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 11

Just my new fav now. I enjoyed everything from start to finish. So lovely written no more hot written and it was just pure bliss to read. I enjoy the most when Ashely just turns someone and then ignores him totally I also liked the ending how he thought he was free and then just turned over into another sock.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2019 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 11

Just fantastic...

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2019 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 11

Outstanding chapter. Just wrote down two parts I saw a little typo, no big deal though:"I am your God," Ashely with a very sadistic toneHe rarely say daylight anymoreYes I would love more chapters like this from some random guys perspective and it like this, it was sooo gooood. But dont just make Ashley diappear or not be mentioned I totally liked it like this how he has his parts too.Thank you so much for writing. And again structuring your plot so damn well. This story is totally the best. Or Ashley is just. That pest problem part with the religions at the door was sadly soo damn short Would totally enjoy another turned into tiny pest plot. But the ending also was so good like the entire sock idea. And how he has pain everytime Ashely was walking and the smell was terrible for him and literally swallowing the sweat. A bit too little gaging of him about it haha.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2019 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 11

Dude!!! I did not even register towards the end of your last sentence, asking about it, that this was a flashback. What a wonderful idea. Lol I really did not register it. I was a bit confused later at the end because of the college parts and I was like.. wait a minute. And the house part too with the parents and Ashely not living in the college flat anymore. Now it all makes sense. So this story playe like 2-3 years before the mains tory I guess? I really enjoyed that. One thing I want to say dont do any flash forwards though. I wouldnt want Ashely to be older actually as in the main story. I also like this out of a person who gets transformed perspective and then mix it during the story of Ashely coming around and then write it out of the transformed perspective. This is so hot. So yes, totally do more of these. I wouldnt mind to find out some flash back plots too where Ashely was between 13-17 or so before he went to college, and in the main story he is 19 I think right. I have so many fantasies honestly you already did a few of them so amazing in your chapters. Maybe a toilet paper transformation where someone became a single sheet of toilet paper and Ashely wiping with it of how the shit smear rocks over his tongu as the sheets surface. Then maybe Ashely doesnt look properly while letting the spilled sheet fall and it falls over the toilet onto the floor, flushing leaving. Some dead silence. Then another boy enters notices the toilet paper with a disgusted look while pissing and aims his dick to the side spalshing piss over it for 2 seconds. The toilet paper totally just a transparent shit stained yellow thing, with a hole where the piss stream hit it, the person totally in pain. The sheet would dry over two days and baking with the toilet floor, like you know how it couldnt get removed anymore and they are totally baked together. And it rot there for weeks looking up of boys taking shits and piss. Then maybe one teen cuming and a cum fotnain splash on it too. Maybe the cleaning lady then casually wipes the floor and the paper rolls into a dirty looking paper ball, but still remains next to the toilet. And then another day a boy steps with his sneaker on it, it glues with a wet smaahsh into the boys sneaker treat, and then again drys in there. And the boy then steps into dog shit later. Wiping off his shoe on rgass the little paper ball dissolges, and then is eaten by a dog maybe even too, becoming made into dog shit. I had this "circle" idea once with things getting worse and worse and worse of bad luck. I just enjoy really nasty and cruel concepts the most.

Reviewer: camehere2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2019 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

I have to correct my last review because. This chapter is totally now the best chapter of the entire story. From the bgeninnung to mid to end part. There was nothing I did not like. Seriously... the only thng which could even had made it a bit better if you had Bucky even go through hell a bit longer during his suffering, crying and all but that was just a minor thing. This is now my favorite chapter of you ever and mostly the best you ever wrote. I totally enjoyed this perspective and the best was how Ashely didnt reacto to his please he was just an object now, a sock, and Ashely didnt care.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2019 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh just saying I think the 3rd person narrator totally fist perfect for this story, dont change it Or at least for ever. I thing the all knowing one fits so much better than a I perspective for this kind of story :-) Did not see any mistakes too.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2019 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 11

Was hoping for an update on this story and you did not disappointed XD Totally amazing chapter. I don not want to say as usual because all of them are special. Thhank you for writing. I really enjiyed the sock theme too.

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