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Reviewer: Kane001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2018 5:31 AM Title: Greg - the date giver

Greg is going to feel that in the morning. Makes me wonder what's going to happen next. It's going to be hard for him to get around with that bad leg. 

Also love what happened with Jamie's Boss. A fitting Death.



Author's Response:

Thanks, hope you keep enjoying it all. I actually re wrote the bosses death about 4 times, each time it got longer and longer. I had to stop myself other wise it would of never ended.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2018 2:06 AM Title: Greg - the date giver

An exciting and fun chapter. I greatly enjoyed the boss getting told what a scumbag he is. Then the boss's running to the Giantess Jenna for help. Love her facial expression before stepping on him. It was a detailed and deserved crush. I also enjoyed her cleaning her shoes and mess with a tissue. I thought when she got to Jamie she might mention the bug she crushed just to give Jamie another clue and to further enhance the crush story.
His exploring Goddess Jamie's body and loving her nipple was Awesome. Great details and a lot of fun.
I like the addition of Alyssa. I will be interested in how she figures in.
Greatly enjoying your story. Any crushing that a lady does is always appreciated.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks, its good to hear you are enjoying it so far. I always enjoy giving extra detail here and there.

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