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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2018 6:58 PM Title: A sticky lunch

I think you should do what you want. It brings happiness and makes you write better. I'd like to see Jamie find him.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, its good to hear that. In my overall plan I see Jamie eventually finding Greg.

Reviewer: Kane001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2018 2:19 PM Title: A sticky lunch

I was afraid this story was never going to get a new chapter. Good thing I was wrong. For me, there's no such thing as too much detail. More detail equals more mental visualization. I'm curious to read what happens between Greg and Alyssa.



Author's Response:

Sometime it takes me a while to finish a chapter, meanwhile other time i will have a few in reserve. Thanks for the feedback and as for Alyssa, I can see her being around sometimes.

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