Date: July 23 2018 6:21 AM Title: Gregs Watch
I love alyssa!!! Please do more of her!
Author's Response:
I'm thinking of doing a side story later involving her, I think her mood doesnt match the rest of the story, but on her own it can get much meaner.
Date: April 21 2018 2:19 AM Title: Gregs Watch
I really love this story!!
Date: March 16 2018 12:05 AM Title: Gregs Watch
is greg going to get close to his mother's feet?
Author's Response:
Probably not.
Date: March 09 2018 6:27 AM Title: Gregs Watch
Kinda a shame he went aggressive. It would have been cool for him to spend some time as toejam.
Maybe at some point he could get trapped in the treads of the girl's shoe while she plays.
Author's Response:
This is definitly happening in the future.
Date: March 07 2018 11:00 AM Title: Gregs Watch
great job! never feel like you have to skip any detail, even if you think your readers won't like your fantasy. i wrote about 2 chapters once here and deleted them thinking it was too much :(
hope you keep the unaware stuff in your story forever! i like the detail in how the protagonist interacts and uses his senses on objects. you'd be good at body exploration, mouth encounters and bare feet chapters.
I don't know about you but i really like very oblivious giantesses, like they still dont recognise a person even if they hold the tiny to their eye, they still see a weird bug. what are your thoughts on this? hope you keep ellie around for a fair while longer
cheers
Author's Response:
Thanks! I feel that if you should write what you would want in a story and never take criticisms to heart. There will be more unaware and body exploration in the future but I fell that eventually he will be found, Greg can't keep getting into these worse and worse spots without eventually slipping up.
Date: March 04 2018 4:33 AM Title: Gregs Watch
Cool beginning.
Date: March 01 2018 9:46 AM Title: Gregs Watch
Really nice story so far. Loving the unaware, as well as the details. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I was worried it would be too much. I have alot more planned aswell.