Date: February 23 2018 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Controlly Kelly
Love the concept. I have a short idea for the future, is it possible that maybe she could be playing with one of the planets in her mouth, and maybe her mom walks in, causing her to be clumsy and accidentally swallow the planet?
Date: February 22 2018 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Controlly Kelly
Did I provide inspiration for something? Wow I only thought only great writers did that so I am pretty happy to see this. I am not into gentle at all, but I will come around to keep seeing how the story develops.
I'm so glad you approve! 50 tiny planets like that is such a good concept c:
Date: February 22 2018 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Controlly Kelly
This looks like a very promising start! I can't wait to see more. There's a lot she can do with 50 planets! I also hope you continue your other stories as well because I really enjoyed those too
Date: February 21 2018 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Controlly Kelly
Heck yeah! The Elite 50 was so good.
Even though you said Kelly will be gentle, but I think it would be cool if some of them maybe later on will do something to upset her and make her angry and cause her to show her wrath. Or maybe a female friend of Kelly's or a sister will get a hold of them and be not-so-gentle.
Anyway, I love the concept of The Elite 50/The Kelly 50, so I'm curious to see where you go with the whole gentle thing. I'll be checking back for updates.
Well, maybe not completely gentle. Just like, more casual and oblivious when she decides to do stuff :P