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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2018 4:40 AM Title: Rise & Fall of Umbran Society

Thank you for adding another chapter.

I'm somewhat enjoying how sometimes this story shows alle the effort that goes into maintaning a goddes, like with those laundry factories. This is a detail not many stories look into and it was original I think.

I want to thank you for writing, and I'm still reading it even though I'm usually to lazy to leave feedback.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reply!

 

There will be another chapter soon along a similar line thanks to the previous review :)

Reviewer: Coldsnow Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2018 8:12 PM Title: Rise & Fall of Umbran Society

Loving this series and I am always happy to see another chapter to read. As for an idea maybe Charlotte gives the task of cleaning her hairbush to a planet where the planet needs to use heavy machinery or a massive amount of people to even move the hairs. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for this!

I really like that idea! I will make it work! :D 

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