Date: June 19 2009 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great story, the detail is great! I wish you would make more
Date: March 29 2008 6:30 AM Title: The Arena
Thank you, Girlfood (splendid title by the way) for posting our joint effort on this most excellent site. It is a thrilling part to one of the best stories today, and it deserves many praises. Jolly well done!!!
P.S. I especially loved the bit that described Stehanie's buttocks consisting of the males she had eaten.
Author's Response: Well done yourself, partner. Good working with you.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2008 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sorry to hear that a second chapter was lost. While there is nice broad detail in this story for it continue or spin off, given the universe-detail that you offer, it is also a good stand-alone.
Well done!
Author's Response:
Thank you for writing so many reviews Scrumptious . I do enjoy getting them and take into consideration any suggestions people make. It is very kind.
Yes the second chapter was lost. It was a good chapter in my opinion but I have written a new one with banfield. This takes the story in a different direction than I had planned but I hope it will be enjoyable. The posting should come within a few days. Thanks again.
Date: January 09 2008 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
O yes, another exciting yarn. I love the multitude of eating minute men by gorgeous females AND the consumption of fully-grown males. This story has both. Well done, 'girlfood.'!!! You have become one of my favourites.
Author's Response: thank you very much banfield. I acutally had a second chapter written up for this story (as well as material for other stories) before my computer died. maybe i will recompose it. thanks again!