[Report This]Date: October 19 2017 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Beautifully written. You have to love the older, seductive lady next door aspect. I can just imagine those large wrinkled soles and how inviting they would be. Wonderful work as usual. Very excited to read the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! The new chapter is up now.
Date: October 06 2017 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet!
Author's Response:
She certainly thinks so
[Report This]Date: October 05 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, boy. Now the fun begins! Jason’s a lucky guy even if he doesn’t appreciate it yet.
Author's Response:
I imagine this will be the opinion of most readers by the end of this
[Report This]Date: October 03 2017 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is looking so cool, and I love TalkngHead's work on DeviantArt. I know I'm kinda late to the party, but I hope they take it nice and slowly, just a little shrinking at first while Heather gets her feet rubbed and her toes sucked in Jason's dwindling mouth, and gradually getting more and more adventurous as it goes on. I'd especially love to see some special emphasis on the point where Jason first becomes too small to put up any kind of credible resistance to further shrinking.
I'm very interested to see how you handle such an erotic foot-focussed situation; it kind of has shades of how I wish Julia had gone towards the end, especially when she was so close to microsizing everyone and making them worship her feet. I think it would be neat if Heather had some legitimate victims from time to time that she wasn't so gentle with, to show her power off with Jason as her witness. I'm picturing some kind of road rage incident leading to a car being chased around and toyed with by giant bare feet that keep getting bigger and bigger, until it's placed on a toenail the size of a football field and zapped out of sight.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. They will technically be taking it slow at first, but not quite that slow.
The whole rest of this story is indeed pretty focused on Heather and Jason playing together.
Date: September 29 2017 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
This looks very promising!
And while I'm not sure I wrote it down, someone using the prmd to have consensual fun is something I wanted to see, so a HUGE(*) "thank you" to TalkingHead for the commission!
(I tried writing the scripts for a few custom videos and got stuck on choosing what happens. They've been there since 2015 iirc, so if you see a custom video on c4s with say five alternative endings it's probably me :)
Author's Response:
Consensual fun with a PMRD is something I've toyed with using more before in my stories, so it was a good fit to have a commission so in that vein.
Date: September 28 2017 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving the set up. Great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 25 2017 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sultry cougar foot-action, you say? Count me in! I already like this just based off the set up.
Author's Response:
Hop aboard, then
[Report This]Date: September 25 2017 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Once again: thanks for writing this story! You really captured the concept w ell and ran with it!
It only gets better from here, folks!
[Report This]Date: September 24 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sorry; meant to say "Welcome home!"
Each new story of yours is like reading your very first one.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear I always project novelty
[Report This]Date: September 24 2017 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
"Here's to you, Ms. Goo-ood-man."
English translation: tantalizing start. And welcome aboard! :-)
Author's Response:
Doesn't have the syllabic ring of Robinson, does it