Date: January 09 2018 1:32 AM Title: The 4th of July
This is probably one of the very few stories on this site that I'm not only am excited to read but actually READ. Everything else I usually just skip to the good parts or forget about.
Please don't drop this masterpiece until it's finished! And yes, take your time on finishing it ;)
P.S. Can't wait for more butt stuff, specifically the hole :)
Thanks for all your hard work in making this as perfect as possible!
Date: January 06 2018 4:46 AM Title: The 4th of July
I liked when she walked past him and created a breeze. It's cool that he still has some fear. If your small you should be scared of big people.
Loved her adults get to make choices, children do not and her playful swat on the butt. It lets you know that she could spank him if she wanted to.
Still enjoy it greatly when Michaela lifts him into the car seat. Loved her finger touching his nose.
Loved his holding two of her fingers. Also loved the confrontation with billy and how Quickly Michaela handled it. Her putting 2 fingers under his chin as she reprimanded him was Awesome.
Tiffany was great. Shouldn't he call her Miss Tiffany? Will she see him again?
The needing help with the soda was great. The shower scene was cool. I wish She would babysit me. Loving this story
[Report This]Date: January 04 2018 10:16 AM Title: The 4th of July
Hey, I just read this story for the first time, and I just love it so much. It’s gonna kill me now that I’m out of binging to do and will ha e to wait for updates.
I love the characters and scenario you’ve set up here. Chris and Michaela mesh so well together. I love her soft yet commanding personality, and how they both have these feelings they don’t fully understand. Yet it’s clear that Michaela isn’t afraid to experiment.
The other thing that makes this story really cool in my eyes is that it’s one of the only stories on this site that actually exists in at least some realm of possibility, and yet it still manages to be pretty erotic. My favorite size for the tiny has always been about 3 inches, but this story has still gotten me extremely invested.
You’ve built an intriguing and believable scenario with believable characters and relationships. Great job, and keep up the good work!