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Reviewer: Pok420 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2020 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Just your average workday?

I think sparse updates and jumping all over the place with the chapters is hard to follow or have fans looking for the story cause it gets pushed around with so many updates of other stories you would really have to search for it under the most recent stories watch this just came out but 456 or 7 more strories will also come out which pushes you right off the front page and  Me being one will have trouble putting the story together when you look at chapter 14 then chapter 17 then back to chapter 13 then  to chapter 20th it's kind of confusing to put what you are reading together  That's just my opinion but if you decide to kill the story here there is nothing we as readers can do



Author's Response:

The story will continue for sure on DA.
https://www.deviantart.com/barrowman2012

The 2 water chapters are chapters for later. Everyting else happens in chronological order. That is Chapter 01 to Chapter 17.
So the update her is "Chapter 17"

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