Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2018 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 06 - Orientation Part Two

Island in the Pacific, Lots of German influnce (Hilda, Helga, village, de Veers-is that Wollen Deutch?)-Pre-World War I colony maybe, or maybe Odessa?

Helga seems to be a good person, she seems to try to look out for those smaller then herself and wants Wendy to do the same (though as with their travel to the village Helga wants Wendy to get to her 'answer' on her own, with only slight postive reenforcement, likely knowing Wendy from her mother is already a decent soul).  Hilda haven't seen enough of, but if she's in Helga's sphere likely she would think roughly the same.  Lyn seems to be decent(saving Bruce when it would annoy Ming), but in an enviroment (with Ming) that is cold, and unfeeling at best (could be cruel and torturous at worst).  Dr. Ming seems at best amoral, mocking of someone standing up for a loved one against all odds seems villainous (I can see Helga being a bit pissed at getting cut, then having Lyn secure Bruce and say something like "this sucks I know I will do everything I can to make sure you and her are safe and well, but fighting me isn't the way, yes your were very brave but it won't help against two giantesses, please remember that and be careful...)

Find it intresting that Gene-tech is known for a manure distrubitor, I would presume that 70 tall women (and possibly men, though we haven't seen any, I would guess a woman as smart as Wendy is she would pick up on that by now... a Man got her to the facility, men drove in a PZKW VI for her strength test, she's held a man, and LIKED it until she felt guility) would provide for such trade, along with other agraculture they would be in postion to distrubite their formulas to most of mankind in less then a decade (everyone has to eat).

Which gets us back to 'Odessa' again lots of German items, who are the Elders and council?  Ming doesn't quite match, but during WWII Japan and German had some shared bases in the Pacific, could this be one?  Ming is not Japannese, but Japan did have the pupet state of Manchuria, could they have supplied resources and personal to a joint base in support of their masters?

Hoping you maintain a gentle storyline with heroines and heros,

It seems that some power is keeping an eye on Wendy (shower), NATO? US? presuming all they know could they reverse engineer the process?

Seems Sam likes and is protective of Mark (as is Helga and Wendy, but those two are protective of the whole village :-) ), Mark is also going to be part-time in Gene-Tech could he be an unknowing test subject? Maybe get him a bit closer to Sam in hieght?

Lots of questions, is the island ran by ex-axis/nazis?  Are there even token male giants?  Why expirement in growth (other than being a story on Giantess world LOL).  Again hoping for Heroines and Heros in a gentle or gentlish story, Humilation and slave markers a bit worrying, but if we have folks in the mold of Ming I can see it.  Destruction, well if you have 70+ foot tall Giantesses fighting OF COURSE theres destruction.

So far a great story, like the world building.  Thank you.

Author's Response:

Wow, very perceptive with your detailed review and very good questions too. Maybe you are on to something. ;)
Ming is indeed not Japanese and we will find out more about her in the later chapters. The different sections of the Hive facility will also be explored.

"de Vries" is one of the most common surnames in the Netherlands and someone with at least some roots from the Dutch province of Friesland.

I think you will like the character development, story development and interesting situations, scenes and events. I don't like one dimensional characters either and many things have a goal or purpose.