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Reviewer: Tantro Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2018 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 05 - Orientation Part One

Amazing chapter love the slow paced action so more characters can be introduced and developed. Keep the story going.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouriging words.
There will be more characters introduced and with some growth scenes along with it. A lot of different things will happen. I want keep writing and want to post chapter 09,10 and 12 and 15, because I find them satisfying. But for the sake of the story and the pacing it is possible they will be much further along and I can't post them yet. I want to show them, but chapter 6 have to come first.

 

 

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