Reviewer: Crocodile Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2017 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 03 - The Incredible Growing Wendy

This chapter is a growing fan's dream! Even has the old fashioned growing out of cloths niche for good measure.

I like how all of the actors have their functions and this is not glossed over giving the story a sense of realism.

Wendy falling on the big mean tank and turning it into a potato pancake was hilarius too!

Great just Barrowman and I'm definately looking forward to the next chapters as it would appear that the plot is indeed thickening.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the positive words, Croc. I put in a lot of time and effort in this growth scene.

From now on they're going to be more interesting developments in this story.
These good reviews is what keeps my writing.

Thanks, reviewers.