Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 02 - The Intern

Hmm. It seems that we will be looking through this world with the eyes of Wendy. (What a lovely name!)

While the other couple just ran off and got caught by this giantess, this girl just gets to walk into a facility that helps her. Part of me couldn't help but notice the great difference between the couple and Wendy and how they got introduced to this island and the scientist.

I'm assuming Wendy is good-hearted and has a soft spot for cute and tiny things. I believe she might be initially against seeing the giantess use the couple as a test subject.

The facility is "top safe", yet that couple found the giantess within minutes. Doesn't seem that much of a secret with a giantess lurking around. With a giant woman, comes a giant facility. Shouldn't be hard to miss.

Well, we learned that the scientist can also change sizes at will, and change other people's size too. We know that she can make people grow, but can she make people shrink.

This woman, Helga, is the same woman that captured the couple, right? If so, I'm guessing that she has caught more people before. The way she handled the couple seemed full of expertise, so I wouldn't be surprised to find more tiny people (regular sized people) within the facility.

I love the mysteriousness of the story. We don't know why Wendy is there or what will the couple face while being captured.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your extensive review Tom :) You make some interesting points and are maybe on to something. About the facility, much more will be explained. ;)

Reviewer: Crocodile Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 02 - The Intern

Well this was a big surprise..  It looks like the Giants are very accustomed to dealing with people much smaller than they are.

And it looks like Wendy will be seing things their way very soo. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Crocodile.
It indeed seems that Wendy is going to see the world through different eyes. :)