Date: May 14 2021 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
please remove the photos from the description, if you want pictures in a story put it in the story, it is lagging the main site
Author's Response:
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Date: August 10 2020 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Just a question before I even read this latest installment Will this story ever be in Chronological order? It's great but hopping all over the place I'm not really sure how to understand Jump forward jump sideways jump backwards?
Author's Response:
Apologies, Pok420.
I posted chapter 19 and 20 before other chapters. I want to show some stuff and not take to long to post something new. I have many chapters in almost finished state that are even further along the story.
How you should read the chapters is in chronological order. Forget 19 and 20. I will not post these kind of chapters as long as the chapters should become before them are not done.
Thanks for the comments.
[Report This]Date: October 30 2019 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Great Building suspense chapter, is Wendy a bit worried about her new size? Possibly concerned she might hurt someone if she is not careful? Things should get more interesting in the next couple of chapters, great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review, Bigdawg K.
The dream can be interpretet in many different ways. ;)
This promotion will open a lot of doors for Wendy.
Date: August 26 2019 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
When will we see chapter 13? This is such a fabulous story.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Diesel, for the encouraging compliments. The comments and reviews, give a positive effect and inspiration.
Because of exams and busy at work my focus on it wasn't very strong. The last exam on 3 September. When I'm done with that I hope to spend more time on chapter 13.
Have been spending time writing the rules for this world, logistics of the Hive facility, etc. This should help me avoid mistakes in descision making. There are multiple scenarios and the most entertaining/interesting one most be chosen. The quality must be kept high.
Thanks again. :)
[Report This]Date: July 06 2019 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Great new chapter, things seem to be moving in many fronts. Little worried about Helga not guiding Wendy as much as had been.
Looks like it's good news for Sam's family, wonder if Roy will bring officer Steiner with him to dinner? If he does will Samatha have 'desert' ready for him?
Again Great chapter, glad you were able to update, keep it up and thank you1
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Helga will still guide Wendy in the science stuff and some key moments. I have too see where it goes.
Good you pointed that out. Made a mistake. It should be Max Steiner who is coming for dinner, instead of Roy.
[Report This]Date: April 16 2019 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Great new Chapter, liked that Wendy was exploring and learning about the Island, Cindy seems like a good person, Hiedi seems a good kid, The Doc and her 'normal' seem to know each other well! Elsa seems a touch standoffish and angry, and Brenda's a brat, hard to believe those two are related to Helga let alone her daughters.
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Over the course of the story we see more about these characters and their background.
Yes, Wendy exploring, learning and growing as a person in this new form.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2019 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Great Chapter, good to see more characters, not so good to see Dr. Ming, but maybe we will see more of her villianous schemes??? Keep it up!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comments, Bigdawg K.
Yes, we will see more of her schemes and more interesting. More characters will be introduced as the story progresses.
How deep will this rabbithole go.
[Report This]Date: January 29 2019 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Great Story man, can't wait for Chapter 10!
Author's Response:
@Last_one_33.
I hope I can finish in the weekend. The first part of it is done and could be its own chapter, but I want to make it much longer.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2019 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Great Story, awesome discriptions and attention to detail, definitely a favorite of mine, Keep up the excellant work!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Ugly One.
I try to be very descriptive and detailed as possible. Sometimes a writer can forget that the reader can't see his thoughts.
I'm far with chapter 10 and hope it will be finished this week.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2019 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Great Chapter! So the captured people are 'volunteers' for experiments, Helga though very humane and kind backs what her organization doing them... We get to see Lyn being her 'playful' self. What is the new intern going to make of all this... What are the house rules and what will they need to know. Again great story keep it up! Thank you.
Author's Response:
You are very observant, as always. :) Bigdawg K. Thank you for your reviews.
We will go in deeper into Helga's character in the later chapters.
What is the new intern going to make of this... in interesting question.
I purposely stopped the conversation there about, "What they need to know".
Date: January 17 2019 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Can't wait to see more, keep up the great work! Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your support.
Chapter 09 will be interesting as it will have more characters and more character interaction in it than I originally planned. I hope to finish it in a few days.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2019 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Seems like Hans just continues to put people into 'capture' situations, little worried about the 'permament' Silicence of Paul so far I don't recall anyone dying, might Paul be the first?
Great Chapter keep up the awesome work!!! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Indeed, that seems to be one of his jobs. ;) Lisa and Roberta didn't stay at the spot Hans recommended could that change the fate of these ladies?
Something made Paul stop in screaming in fear.
Glad you enjoyed it, Thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: January 05 2019 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Finally more Wendy, Helga, good seeing Sam, little embrassing what happens at the mansion... Glad to see Chapter 7, please let it be weeks rather than months for chapter 8. Thanks great chapter
Author's Response:
Chapter 08 - "Different faces of terror" is on its way. It is half done. I hope I can speed up the frequency too.
Thank you for your comments. :)
[Report This]Date: January 04 2019 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Greet new chapter, Sam and family seem 'normalish' for three fairly rapidly growing ladies. Sam likes Mark, she might do what she suggested to her daughter do with Jason to him if Roy comes through. Roy has a 'large' romantic intrest as well.
Wendy's first day on the job, and two of her volenteers are 'shagging' hope and expect she will be nice and that it will be Helga giving the verbal repremaind. Looks like they have had some interesting observers before, with Helga and Wendy they should be ok.
Can't wait for the next chapter, please continue! Thank you!
Author's Response:
"Sam likes Mark, she might do what she suggested to her daughter do with Jason to him if Roy comes through." That would certainly be a possibilty. ;)
You are right in point. Verbal reprimands maybe get accompanied with some punishment games. ;)
Thank you for your review.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2018 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Found this story looks good, only wish you would update it more, keep up the great work, let us review it more, you can always edit chapters and we can delete jerky reviews :-).
Again thank you for the effort and work you put into a great story, please MORE!!!
Author's Response:
Thank for your review, Battlemaster-3d. I want to update it faster too and have been trying with chapter 07. I have made a summary what will be in it. In this chapter I really have to be careful of every small detail in my eyes.
The more reviews the better. ;) It encourages me to work harder on the chapters.
Glad many people show interest in the story.
The story will continue, let's see if I can make progress in the weekend when I finally have some free time to work on it.
Date: October 16 2018 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
going through the story a couple of questions come to mind:
How are did their daughters grow so large? With Helga did she and her husband/mate/lover with or without help of the labs on the island conieve her two daughters after the process and then at least every female from Helga on down is going to be a giantess? or did she put them through the process as well? What about Sam, she's only been under the process for a year, did her daughters go through it as well? Does having a close kin (mother/sister/even father/brother?) go through the process spill over to their relations? It would make sense that girls who are still growing would grow faster then the 'already completed growing' Sam. Seems a bit wrong to be subjecting children without choice to what is still an experimentail process... Though it would be harder to raise them being 70 foot tall and their 3 feet tall/long, maybe safer to have them roughly the mom's size?
Just a couple of questions, like the story, hope it won't be another two months before the next update. Thank you for your work, thought and effort you put in.
Author's Response:
@Last_one_33. Thank you for your review.
I don't mind those questions at all, I like them. Don't worry, I like the detailed logistics about all your questions. I have all the answers to your questions detailed over the course of the story. These pieces of explanation of how things work I have already written and have to check in which chapter to reveal something.
I want to answer your question why subjecting children without choice to an experimental process. But I can't, I would spoil to much. The growth procedure is much more complex and or a reason.
Date: October 15 2018 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Stumbled on to this one, so far so good, agree with the comments. One thing I think most didn't fully pick up on, Bruce and Genie as well as Sea King. Helga has set up Wendy to find out that the place she is interning for is kidnapping poeple. She "owns" the pair, if it's her and Helga likely the 'test subjects' will be plianent and cool (and Wendy and Helga will be professional, likely gentle and kind), but I sense Helga will leave for oh about and hour after proding, or stubly hinting to Wendy or Bruce and Genie how those two got to the Island. Wendy if she's who I think she is will be horrified when she finds out one they were kidnapped, two what Ming and Lyn did to them and three that Helga and her youngest captured them.
Helga will take the hate and explain as best as she can, Bruce and Genie will likely back her (espeacily since they are being treated by her and Wendy likely having much better conditions and being treated like humans!). When the stuff hits the fan what will Wendy do? My guess is folks like Helga have a plan and want Gene-tech to be a force for good for humanity, that they are likely not in a postion to ensure that and that Wendy and others they are bringing can help so that Gene-tech can be such a good instiution.
All I can guess is a lot of Wendy's wonder will be lost, I think her, Helga and others will do the right thing. It would be ironic if while on a 'recreation' hike (Wendy carrying the pair in her pocket or the like)the information slips when Helga instructs her to 'secure' some tourists in the wrong place which would prod Bruce and Genie t spill how they were captured...
So far a good stroy, thank you for your effort in this.
Author's Response:
@Ugly One. Interesting reasoning and thank you for this detailed review and liking this story.
Date: October 15 2018 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Liking this story its nice to see different size ranges. Wondering how it all began and whats going to happen to the initial couple.
Wonder if Mark will end up getting lucky with Sam.
Nice world building keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Yes, those smaller are people who are still in growth or failed experiments who didn't grow anymore or super slow. The end result if succesful is 10 to 12 times their original sizes. Wendy was the exception and grew in one go to a little more than 12 times her original size.
How it all began I already have written. ;) That is a very interesting story in it self and it will be explained in the later chapters. Good questions. :)
The initial couple wil certainly get some story time in the coming chapters.
Thanks for your review, Grandmaster B.
Date: September 30 2018 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
It’s been 2 months that you haven’t update any chapter.:/
Author's Response:
Thanks for interest in this story. I will try my best to post faster. I do my best for this story.
Date: July 07 2018 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
I started to read this story yesterday and I'm really enjoying it. Good job!:D
Author's Response:
Glad you like it, Pterodactylus. Thanks for the review. That keeps me going to write more. :)