Date: August 03 2019 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 8: Perplexed Feelings
How did I not found this story before? I like the romance kind of story. Gentle with some action and I loved how you took your time build up Alex character and relationships. And loved even more when he run to embrace Barrie. Also curious about Lacey and how this love triangle will play out.
One question: the story is marked as a shrinking story (to micro size). Will Alex shrink? Would really like to see that happening :DD
Please, don't abanddon this story! It's really good! Thank you for updating and please keep it going. Also, sorry for any mispealing. Although fluent, english is not my primary language.
Date: May 17 2017 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 4: Confused Feelings
I've just finished reading your first four chapters... You have a potentially very good story here, but there are certain very distracting features: the massively huge open spaces between paragraphs... Can you not somehow eliminate them?
You also frequently skip words or letters in your text, that leave one to wonder what it was you meant to say.
Of a more minor nature: breasts are plural, and whenever you are not referring to a specific one (left or right, or otherwise understood to be one or the other) they should always be referred to in plural.
Otherwise, keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.