I have to say I really enjoyed the story the whole way through up until the very end. The ending I found very lack luster and seemed pretty blan compared to the other ways characters were killed off. To be honest I though it was going to end with Mary accidentally sitting on him or the device and breaking it leading back to the title of "Babysitting Unaware". Even though the story was very good it was just the ending didn't seem like your best compared to the other chapters. And I am not trying to be negative I just wanted to give my opinion on one of my favorite stories on this site and I am just slightly bummed that was how it ended.