Date: March 29 2017 6:33 PM Title: Jo's Wrath
Holy shit! I was not expecting this twist! I was personally hopping for a mutually happy ending but that is not possible now :/ Well that won't ruin my enjoyment. I hope things don't end too soon. I know our friend my disagree but I never want this to end :P
While I do want to see the stomach, I also want him to win but again, that's just my personal desires and with all this story has offered it would be selfish to demand more >_< Can't wait to see what you have planned next!!
Author's Response: Don't give up hope, my good man; I might just pull another Shyamalan on you just yet. ;P Just look forward to the night, there'll be plenty more action before we reach the end, including our foray into Jo's guts I've been teasing for so long. I'm thinking there'll be at least more than seven chapters yet, so while the end is in sight, there's still plenty more to come. Glad to hear you're still enjoying reading this as much as I am writing it. :)
[Report This]Date: March 29 2017 1:36 PM Title: Jo's Nap
"Consistant quality" doesn't do this work justice. Great imagry and detail as always. Nice developemnt at the end! I can't wait to see what happens next. A time out in the stomach? A dinner that will cause fear and discomfort? Or maybe she will show some humanity and forget about it (unlikely XP ) Either way if he is going to last the night he is going to need to get a lot better at sleepytime. Next time just stay secure and hump the tongue when she's out as revenge XD
Author's Response: Man, you set me some high bars to vault with your acclaim, Mr Pie- thank you so much! I certainly won't tell you what our little almost manslaughterer could face from Jo for this little incident, but I will tell you that our giantess is certainly not in a merciful mood after her brush with death. The night may claim him yet.. but of course, my lips are sealed. ;)
[Report This]Date: March 20 2017 2:59 PM Title: Jo's Allergies
Man, this guy passed up the opportunity of a lifetime! I know I'd love to be Jo's toothpick/brush. I'd get to have her morning breath all to myself every day ^_^ Just got to bargin for safety and bam, eternal paradice.
Minor ideas, maybe give some comparasons so we have a more exact idea what things are like. Does her breath at this point remind him of the dumpster out back since she ate at work? Has the tongue softened up at all? Also maybe now that they are alone he could speak up a bit, talk to his hostess. Seems Jo is doing all the talking anymore. We know this guy's thoughts but Jo doesn't at all.
Author's Response: Heheh. You're hilarious, my dear fellow. You think Jo would give him a choice. ;P No, I certainly wouldn't pass it up either, but maybe not permanently-more like for a week at a time, like a holiday. All that about too much of a good thing, y'know? As for comparisons and detailing, I have to say, comparing things to halitosis is a hard task. Generally, I find it to be a unique odour, not like other malodours out there; but I'll certainly try to get in some more comparisons, where I can. Wouldn't want to lose my penchant for detail! As for conversation, I have been holding off on it, mostly because I really don't know how it'd go- and I think Jo enjoys her dominance over her prisoner. Still, I'll try and work it in there, if I can. Anything to give the story more variety than it already has! :)
[Report This]Date: March 09 2017 7:58 PM Title: Jo's Gum
Glad to see you're back! Also thrilled to see you took some of my ideas :) Jo really is a mean girl huh? It might be interesting working together with her if he survives this. I'm guessing the mouth puns would never stop xD. Dream stomach fake-out was an interesting maybe preview ;). Lots of opportunity for fun coming up. Club means dancing, dirnking, and maybe even romance? If Jo is closing the cafe herself, maybe she could take some of the alone time to check in with her captive, a progress review.
Lastly, you should consider posting your stuff (or at least have an account for back-up) on another sight like giantesscity.com or writing.com. Would hate to see someone with your talent give up just because of a technical problem <3
Author's Response: Always back for more when it comes to this story, my friend! I feel like, of all the erotica I've written in the past (most if not all of which is long gone), this is my magnum opus. It's really coming together nicely. I wouldn't say Jo was inherently mean, but the dominance she has over our little protagonist brings out this new side in her, and she's certainly enjoying it. Her love of bad puns stems from my own, so don't expect it to stop any time soon! ;D Will definitely fake you up on that review-type chapter; I feel like I can easily transition to it from this one, and I have a good idea of how to do it, too. As for posting my work elsewhere, after this scare I'll certainly look into it, but I feel like nowhere's quite as good as here. We'll see. Until then, I hope to God this place starts open for as long as possible- for all our sakes. :)
Date: March 03 2017 12:07 PM Title: Jo's Teeth
Wonderful chapters again, as always! Glad to see that you liked the idea of Jo cruel behaviour with her tiny speck-hopefully-future-snack! :)
Pretty interesting this last chapter, not only for the obvious reason you already commented on your end notes regarding odor and stink inside mouths, but also for another irregular situation you created here. As it also happens with the other body parts a giantess usually uses as weapon in other naughty stories/vids/artwork there's a preliminary humilliation based on "pain and no gain". Like digging your own grave, when a tiny person succumbs under a feet he may previously has worshipped it. The same goes for any other parts (butt, hands, breasts, vagina....you name it), and for the first time (or at least that I recall), the same goes with a titanic mouth. Working on polishing the weapon that might kill you before it does. Fantastic.
Can't wait, as always. Hyped is my usual mode with you, man.
Oh, btw, do you recommend any other authors with a writing style like you to make the wait esier? :)
Author's Response: Thanks as always, Mr. Leo! You bring up an interesting point, I must say. Foot worship is almost a given thing when it comes to feet-related chapters on this website, and willingness to interact with certain body parts is certainly common; but it's not something you usually see when it comes to the mouth, especially in this sense. While our little protagonist clearly experiences a lot of discomfort in Jo's mouth, I try to make it clear that he's enjoying it as well, in subtle ways. Oh well; much as I'd love to see more odour/mouth play/entrapment combo stories on here, the rarity of them means I can carve out the niche for myself, and fill it with content that I hope can please both myself and you guys. :) As for authors... like I say, I feel like my style and premise are a bit of a niche, so I personally haven't found anything quite like it. The story I feel comes closest to it is, as I mentioned in another review, is JDO's Tongue Ring; sadly, it never made it past the first chapter, but still definitely worth a read while I find time to get the next chapter out. :D
Date: March 03 2017 8:32 AM Title: Jo
You definitely have a talent for description, very well done so far! I just love the casual cruelty of her and her using every day actions that people rarely think about to torment him.
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I feel like the mouth play/odour/entrapment idea is something rarely explored (if ever explored) on here, so I figured why the heck not post a story myself? It's been a hell of a lot of fun to write, and the fact that people are enjoying it too makes me so happy. As for our lovely Jo, I suppose her cruelty stems more from her sense of justice for his fantasies than anything else, but she certainly enjoys the dominance she has over him- and will continue to throughout his entrapment within her jaws. Don't worry, more will be coming down the pipe!
[Report This]Date: March 02 2017 7:03 PM Title: Jo's Teeth
Agreed on those end notes. Mouths are rarely clean, occationally white/straight, and often smelly in the real world yet few stories touch on that. Feet, butts, and more get smell descriptions but mouths often go ignored. All the more reason to cherish this story :)
Blah blah excellent blah blah great detail I've said it before. Looking forward to when her natural halitosis begins to take charge again. Really looking forward to some kind of debrief/ honest review by our hero if he gets the chance. With the way he is getting used to the digusting parts, I love the idea of him wanting to come back again if the risk of death was no longer a factor ;)
Author's Response: Right? I seriously don't get why the ideas of odour and feet/butt going together are so commonplace, and yet the mouth never gets the same treatment. Us odour/mouth play fetishists seem to be in a bit of a niche minority; it's part of the reason I wrote this story in the first place, because I'd never quite seen something like it on here before. JDO came close with Tongue Ring, but alas, it never was continued. So I figured, what the heck? Let's put my own story out there- and thus far I'm really happy with the results and feedback. As for a debrief or review, I'm not entirely sure how I'd do that- perhaps give his opinions to Jo herself? I do really like the idea, so feel free to elsborate on it; I'd certainly consider fitting it into one of the closing chapters. As for risk of death, don't put all your chips on the table just yet... in Jo's mouth, that's ALWAYS a risk. ;)
Date: February 27 2017 7:26 PM Title: Jo's Cruelty
Another great set! Good to get some introspection on how he is dealing with the situation. Got that uvula touched already :3 Lunch is going to be the biggest challenge imo, wonder what is on the menu... Hope we can get some exploration/observation during the slow times, maybe discover the crud that sticks between her teeth from lunch (or even missed from brushing XP)
Author's Response: Thanks! I feel like the introspection really helps to understand how our little protagonist is feeling about the trials he goes through, and by extension how awful said trials are, painting a better picture overall. Little things like that go a long way, I find. As for what's on the menu, that'd be telling... but I will confirm that it's something more solid than soggy cereal. I feel,like you're gonna like what I have planned; it may already include your suggestion. After all, Jo's not the only one getting hungry... ;)
Date: February 24 2017 5:41 AM Title: Jo's Voice
It was a great challenge and you went through it with solvence, congratulations!! I'm proud of seeing your skills getting improved with each chapter...can't wait to enjoy our little guy journey's through Jo's digestive system!! :)
Btw the pic @GiantessTina made was from last chapter I think, the Dental Hygiene, capturing the scene where Jo is playing around with the little man inside her mouth, pressing him to her cheek using her tongue ^^
Author's Response: Glad to hear you liked it! Also...yeah, I'm blind. I didn't notice that the lines on her cheek were the little guy's outline. I was focusing on whatever was coming out of her lips; think it was trousers or a shirt, one of the two. Either way, my bad! :')
Date: February 21 2017 7:23 PM Title: Jo
Haven't read the chapter yet, but just so let you know, @GiantessTina on twitter made an artwork from your last chapter:
https://twitter.com/GiantessTina/status/834200201049030656
Hope you like it! Btw do you have twitter?
Author's Response: Oh wow, I like it! Was this based on Jo's Lips? Because if so, it's pretty cool. Send my gratitude to Tina; I'd love to see if she's up for doing a few more, and thank you again for getting the message out there as well! As for Twitter, no I don't have it, but I may get it sometime in the future. We'll have to see! :)
Date: February 18 2017 2:25 AM Title: Jo's Dental Hygiene
So far so freaking great Lord!! What a journey went our friend through, I wish I could do the same. The way you immerse yourself in the story and try to imagine all the details vividly makes me wonder if you've been really inside a girl mouth before lol
Spectacular the moment when she drinks the mouthwasher and starts to gargle: So close and yet so safe from the gates of death...Great idea there!!
Just to give some snag, I wish there were some dialogue in it, but I know that even though it's more realistic not to as in her routine Jo wouldn't talk. I hope to see more of your talented work sooner than later!! I'm totally hyped for this story.
Oh, by the way, I started my own campaign on twitter to get you an artist to draw this story and to let your name be heard by other important size writers. That being said, I'd recommend you to visit some DeviantArt profiles: Aborigen, Goddess Tina, James Mason, Spawn GTS, Safkteur, Dofus59, Flagg3D and many more I'm sure you'll come across as you lurk around them ;)
Here I give you some links to their work I think you'd love (some of them seem to be done directly for this story lol):
http://flagg3d.deviantart.com/art/Prelude-to-Vore-III-654921061
http://spawngts.deviantart.com/art/Nightmare-2-643201051
http://saftkeur.deviantart.com/art/Mimi-goodbye-gulp-435341456
http://spawngts.deviantart.com/art/Brushing-Foam-Version-651754320
Can't wait to see the following chapters!! :D :D :D
Author's Response: Well I'll be darned! Thank you as always, my friend; especially for trying to get my humble works heard AND made into pictures! That's something I could only dream of, and someone helping me to make said dreams a reality is just the most awesome thing ever. From the bottom of my heart, I thank you. :,) I'll definitely check out those links, too; always looking for new art to behold. The thing is, a lot of the big quality vore artists ask for a financial contribution for their services; money that, sadly, I don't have. But who knows? Maybe someone will see it and love it so much that they just HAVE to look at it. Hope springs eternal! Oh, if only I could experience what I write; that'd be a utopia. I suppose that's the worst thing about macrophilia in general, that with current technology where it stands, we can never experience what we fantasise. In a way, though, this is our silver lining; that we have people like the myriad of wonderful authors on this site that can create and describe such vivid stories for the reading benefit of our community. It really is great. As for dialogue, I get your gripe; having Jo talk to her little prisoner really helped build up the action. There is a reason, though, that I've cut it out for now;'in that I wanted to reveal its effects on our protagonist in its own chapter. Which may or may not be coming up next,.. stay tuned. ;)
[Report This]Date: February 16 2017 8:50 PM Title: Jo's Dental Hygiene
RIP Jo's Morning Breath
2017-2017
But seriously excellent as always. Looking forward to the further tortures over the next 23.75 hours.
Author's Response: I can assure you, my good Mr. Pie, that there will be plenty of tortures over the next twenty three hours; Jo wouldn't have it any other way. As for her now eliminated halitosis, don't consider it dead and buried just yet,,, trust me, we are not nearly done with odour just yet, ;) Excellent to hear you're still enjoying the story!
Date: February 16 2017 8:39 PM Title: Jo
I love this story, the details is amazing. Personally my favorite chair was on Jo's spit. I was wondering if you considered adding maybe an unaware chapter towards the end.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Out of all the chapters thus far, my personal favourite is Jo's Breath, but it's interesting to see that the less read chapters have their avid fans as well. As for an unaware chapter, I may already have some planned.., you'll just have to wait and see. ;)
Date: February 13 2017 12:54 AM Title: Jo's Lips
I hope is September already! :D
Great chapter!! I love how meticolous you are with details in all leves: explaining the scenario, the feelings, the enviroment...It's like being really there. Definitely as a vore lover this story is gonna be printed and well saved with me once you are done with it.
WE VORE LOVERS NEEDED YOU!!! :D :D :D
P.S: Not really a fan of gingivitis or any other mouth diseases but I'm sure that whatever you have in mind I'm gonna like it anyways :)
Oh, and if you need any ideas to encourage your cretivity skills, here are my two cents:
- Maybe she goes for a run with him try to survive the continuous movement and the breath-in-out of her mouth? She would also salivate a lot and would make her wet cavern even more slippery. She can also drink some water after the run to put a final big challenge to our tiny guy ^^
- Maybe she goes on a date or just call home her significant other and well...you know ;) (Though even as exciting as it could be there's too much of this kind of scenario around, which would make it a little bit repetitive)
- How about playing Guitar Hero or sth like that? We have again the cardio as the first option but also a nice loudly survival with the titanic Jo's voice singing. Maybe Our tiny guest has to deal with some deafness after that lol
- Maybe she can test his tiny guest willing to be there by offering him a few chances of escaping. For example, she my goes to buy whatever at any store and leave her mouth open while talking to the clerk, so the tiny guy considers asking for help. This idea would work better if our little man has struggled so much inside Jo's mouth that he is exhausted and scared that he may can't make it and end up swallowed alive.
- Typical one (vol. II): Chewing gum. Making bubbles with him inside.
- Typical one (vol. III): Talking with someone at the phone while eating/going through her day routine, etc
As said, just my two cents!
I'm more hyped than myself next June waiting for the next Game Of Thrones season. Well, actually maybe not, but still. I'm hyped as fuck.
Can't wait to next chapter!!! ^^
Author's Response: Thanks again for all the continued support; I'm humbled by your kind words. More importantly, thank you for the suggestions! While I already had a few ideas of yours in mind (chewing gum, her voice,etc) I'm really liking the idea of her going on a run; never considered how that would affect our little hero in her mouth. I'm also thinking I could get a chapter out of your test idea, as well as incorporating talking when eating into a chapter I already have planned. Considering the slobbish way I've portrayed Jo so far, it'd.certainly fit the bill! Either way, keep an eye out for those chapters, I'll be sure to give you a shout out for them. :) As for Game of Thrones Season 7....I really can't blame you, my dude. It's gonna be legen...wait for it until June....dary, I'm so hyped about it I could cry, no joke. :')
Date: February 12 2017 7:14 PM Title: Jo's Lips
Oh man it is ON! If his eyes were watering with her jaws still open... man I can't wait ^_^ To say I'm looking forward to a micro's detailed description of an unhygenic mouth is an understatement to be sure. Gingivitis here we come!
Author's Response: Oh, it is on like Donkey Kong. I'll give you fair warning, there is a toothbrush in both Jo's and thus our tiny protagonist's future... but not before he gets to experience the true inner stench and experience of her filthy mouth, so get hyped for that. Oh, and don't worry about her mouth getting clean; even if she does brush her teeth, her mouth certainly isn't immediately going to be utopia; that's just no fun. What I have planned will make her mouth even worse than before by the end of this... so stay tuned. ;)
Date: February 12 2017 12:24 AM Title: Jo's Eating Habits
Can't wait to the final episode!! Can't wait to your next story!! Can't wait can't wait can't wait!!
I'll sleep 'till chapter 6. Wake me up when your story ends, please ^^
Author's Response: Glad you're so hyped! Loving to see the enthusiasm, my dude! I'll warn you, there's still a lot more to come before the finale... but I'll wake you up at least when September ends. :P
Date: February 10 2017 10:23 AM Title: Jo's Tongue
You're the author vore fans haven been expecting for years. AVE CÉSAR.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot! I'll continue to try not to disappoint their expectations. :)
[Report This]Date: February 08 2017 6:13 AM Title: Jo
Wow! Just love the mouth play stuff more than anything.
I have to say, This story is simply orgasmic to the senses, and most definatly deliciously descriptive in the most exquisite detaile.
I must admit, that as a reader of this story, having been totally blind from birth to make life and indeed fantasy truly boundless in my mind's nonvisual eye so to speak. :) I appreciate those like yourself, who take the time and words to create a story that which alas, even I can indeed see and feel each and every moment and nuance. Almost as though, I were was really there myself. :)
I wish! Haha :)
May I book a ticket for a joe's mouth adventure session after the show?
Author's Response: Great to know you're enjoying it! Even more so about the detail. Sometimes I feel like I've been going too overboard on descriptions, but if it's really helping paint the scene for lovely readers like yourself as vividly as you say, then I'm succeeding in my job with flying colours, at least by my own standards.
As for your request, I'm not entirely sure our lovely Jo would be up for letting her mouth be used as a public attraction, but I'm sure she would agree to doling out her theatrical performance for a private show. Fair warning, though; it's likely to be a one way trip, if you catch my drift. ;)
[Report This]Date: February 07 2017 10:14 PM Title: Jo's Tongue
Another set of winning chapters! I don't want to dominate your review page more than I already am so I'll probably just write one ever few chapters. Detail and grossness are still A+. Didn't consider that the tongue would be rough but actually yeah, with all the abuse she puts her mouth through I guess it would be rough. Maybe the underside is softer ^_^ Personally hoping our little guy survives, thought a detour to the stomach would be loads of fun too! Will message more ideas until you tell me to shut up ;)
Author's Response: Thanks as always, Mr. Pie! Don't feel bad about leaving too many reviews on the story; if anything, I really appreciate the feedback and it's really nice to know I already have some dedicated fans out there. Plus, the more ideas I get, the more diverse the story can be, and that's always a good thing. :D Like I mentioned in Chapter 4's notes, I can now confirm despite my secrecy that there will be a trip to Jo's stomach for our poor little protagonist; and I'm sure he'll both love and hate every minute though. Whether he survives, though...well, that'd be telling, wouldn't it? ;)
Date: February 07 2017 9:48 PM Title: Jo's Tongue
Love the story but you do realize that you posted the same chapter twice in the same thread don't you?
Author's Response: Glad you like it, and I can't say I did realise. Sorry about that, I'll see if I can prevent that happening in future. Being quite new to the authoring community on this site, I might mess up a few things to do with uploading, so bear with me. Thanks fir telling me, though. :)