[Report This]Date: January 19 2023 8:23 PM Title: Jo
Can Jo make protagonist invincible and trap him in her stomach without worrying about digestion?
Date: January 19 2023 8:16 PM Title: Jo
That was one heck of a story. I am amazed our protagonist didn't blew his load in all this situation. Certainly don't think i will be able to hold.
[Report This]Date: January 25 2022 8:54 AM Title: Jo
I discovered this story with a quick Google search, thinking I was getting to a regular horny story. I was wrong
I quickly became hooked, I wanted to know how it would end. I really liked this mature style of writing, for example, to me, Jo is a great character, it had subtle foreshadowing about her inner good self
I specifically really loved the ending, it was the harvest of the seeds that were planted, taking in count the whole story and giving it the ending it deserves
Maybe it's a bit silly to review a 5 years old story, but I needed to do it. I had to stayed up until 6 AM because I needed to read the next chapter, and yes, I created an account for this.
I hope you'll get to read this because I would love you to know that someone else really enjoyed your story
Date: May 20 2017 9:51 PM Title: Jo
That moment you wish you were this guy lol. Awesome work man. I freaking LOVE this story.
Author's Response: I've heard from people who love this story, but thus far no-one's loved it so much they gave the same stellar review twice! :P Heh, I think we all wish we were our little protagonist, tortured as he may be. All jokes aside, glad to hear you like my story, and thank you for your kind words. Stay tuned for more! :D
Date: March 03 2017 8:32 AM Title: Jo
You definitely have a talent for description, very well done so far! I just love the casual cruelty of her and her using every day actions that people rarely think about to torment him.
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I feel like the mouth play/odour/entrapment idea is something rarely explored (if ever explored) on here, so I figured why the heck not post a story myself? It's been a hell of a lot of fun to write, and the fact that people are enjoying it too makes me so happy. As for our lovely Jo, I suppose her cruelty stems more from her sense of justice for his fantasies than anything else, but she certainly enjoys the dominance she has over him- and will continue to throughout his entrapment within her jaws. Don't worry, more will be coming down the pipe!
Date: February 21 2017 7:23 PM Title: Jo
Haven't read the chapter yet, but just so let you know, @GiantessTina on twitter made an artwork from your last chapter:
https://twitter.com/GiantessTina/status/834200201049030656
Hope you like it! Btw do you have twitter?
Author's Response: Oh wow, I like it! Was this based on Jo's Lips? Because if so, it's pretty cool. Send my gratitude to Tina; I'd love to see if she's up for doing a few more, and thank you again for getting the message out there as well! As for Twitter, no I don't have it, but I may get it sometime in the future. We'll have to see! :)
Date: February 16 2017 8:39 PM Title: Jo
I love this story, the details is amazing. Personally my favorite chair was on Jo's spit. I was wondering if you considered adding maybe an unaware chapter towards the end.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Out of all the chapters thus far, my personal favourite is Jo's Breath, but it's interesting to see that the less read chapters have their avid fans as well. As for an unaware chapter, I may already have some planned.., you'll just have to wait and see. ;)
[Report This]Date: February 08 2017 6:13 AM Title: Jo
Wow! Just love the mouth play stuff more than anything.
I have to say, This story is simply orgasmic to the senses, and most definatly deliciously descriptive in the most exquisite detaile.
I must admit, that as a reader of this story, having been totally blind from birth to make life and indeed fantasy truly boundless in my mind's nonvisual eye so to speak. :) I appreciate those like yourself, who take the time and words to create a story that which alas, even I can indeed see and feel each and every moment and nuance. Almost as though, I were was really there myself. :)
I wish! Haha :)
May I book a ticket for a joe's mouth adventure session after the show?
Author's Response: Great to know you're enjoying it! Even more so about the detail. Sometimes I feel like I've been going too overboard on descriptions, but if it's really helping paint the scene for lovely readers like yourself as vividly as you say, then I'm succeeding in my job with flying colours, at least by my own standards.
As for your request, I'm not entirely sure our lovely Jo would be up for letting her mouth be used as a public attraction, but I'm sure she would agree to doling out her theatrical performance for a private show. Fair warning, though; it's likely to be a one way trip, if you catch my drift. ;)
[Report This]Date: February 06 2017 8:41 PM Title: Jo
Great idea never considered how a story centered on a mouth could be. Amazing I'll be eagerly awaiting every update.
Author's Response: Glad to know you're enjoying it! Don't worry, I intend to update it as often as I can :)
Date: February 01 2017 7:38 PM Title: Jo
First off, I want to say the first two chapters are off to an amazing start. I personally really enjoy mouth play especially with things your'e playing around with. Absolutely love everything you're playing in the future and hope to see more of this story in the future. I hope our hero explores more than just Jo's mouth. Swallowing maybe?
Author's Response: Glad to hear you're enjoying it! It's always great to hear back such positive feedback; especially since this is my first story on here.
As for our tiny protagonist, I've left the prospect of disappearing down Jo's gullet open. It wasn't originally on the cards, but if enough people ask for it, then maybe he's in for more than he bargained.....maybe. I wouldn't want to spoil the story this early in! :P
Date: January 31 2017 7:57 PM Title: Jo
This story has EXCELLENT potential. We have a good deal of details about this mouth and we haven't even gotten close to it yet. That [Odor] tag has me excited too, not enough stories portray things like bad breath. A coffee drinker and a smoker AND it's first thing in the morning? Really looking forward to what that maw is like on the inside. Your description of the breakfast bar makes it sound like you are super tiny, hope he get's to suffer in the mouth for a bit before getting swallowed. Will probably review again on some other chapter ;)
Author's Response:
Glad to know you like the story! I think you'll be most pleased with what I have planned out for this story; the odor tag wasn't added for no reason. I totally agree with you, when it comes to mouth play I think that not enough stories portray the full reality of what being in a mouth would actually be like, in all its facets. With this story, I hope to explore said facets in full; each chapter is gonna be a different scenario of my little protagonist either interacting with or dealing with trials within Jo's mouth. Not to spoil you, but Chapter 3 might be breath related... you'll have to wait and see. ;)
As for swallowing, well, as Jo put it so eloquently herself... we'll cross that bridge when we come to it.
Thanks for reviewing! -Aj