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Reviewer: ilayhu Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 9:03 AM Title: My escape and capture

very nice story

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2007 1:03 PM Title: My escape and capture

I was hoping for a bit longer unaware scene, but its still a great start. I hope you continue your other story as well.

Reviewer: Vord Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2007 11:57 AM Title: My escape and capture

A ten-to-ten wallop! Pretty good story.

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