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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 16 2017 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

To paraphrase Richard Pryor in STIR CRAZY (re: Evan's attitude): "The dude ain't ever gonna learn."

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Just give him a little time, he'll come round.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2017 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 5

Evan still seems to be a bit of a jerk. It's interesting to see how such a macho guy reacts to his sudden loss of power.

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