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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 14 2016 8:42 PM Title: THE KENTRON CONTINGENCY

Nice conclusion. But, if you're not going to make the next story idea the plot of a sequel, I would seriously recommend you change the "yes" back to "no" with regard to completion.

Otherwise, you might confuse the lurkers who _aren't_ such long-time readers of your works. :-)

Author's Response:

I forgot that settng. Yes, I'll have to change it now.

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