Well well well, this looks like we're headed for a really interesting finale. Really, your stories never disappoint, even the shorter ones such as this one. Eagerly awaiting the grand finale.

I liked it at first while reading. But then sadly not that much anymore after Simon was shrunk and swallowed too, that was somehow a "killer" for me for this specific plot idea. I am a bit weird and things need to be in specific ways and follow rules of my mind, otherwise I don't like it. I would had liked it a thousand times, if Simon would have been shrunk and swallowed by Tommy, who would stayed unaware about it and even made fun in some ironic conversation about him. But having someone swallow and then shrunk too in a double shrink destroys it for me, because that literally "wipes" out the first swallow and makes it obsolet.