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Reviewer: Gtslover4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2018 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 21

Let me first say that I like how much detail you go into what the girls are wearing, the colors, etc. you could have easily said Beverly walked in wearing shorts and a top. But the detail in what color and type of shirt it was, also even mentioning what color the jeans were, all that is great. Not only that but the hairstyles and jewelry you describe is nicely down too.

I appreciated more Blair and hope to see more of her, she is so big I figure the tremors she would cause, could alone flip cars and cause buildings to fall.

As you can tell with my own story, I enjoy my gts couple stories and I see that you are maybe laying the foundation for Thomas X Bree? Its nice to see Bree is on the busty side, I would imagine not counting Blair, Beverly, or Sophie, she has the largest breast in the story so far? Also how tall is Bree? I'm trying to paint a picture of how even though she is peaceful and gentle, she could still be intimidating and powerful. I remember you commenting on my use of having a gentle giantess still display power over a tiny, I'm eager to see if you will take a approach to this as well with maybe Bree.

Maybe Thomas will get the treatment from other tinies that Zeke got once people found out he was dating a giantess. It would be funny to see him coping with all the attention and special treatment he gets just from dating a giantess, except him telling everyone that his girlfriend won't hurt you would be legit, unlike Zeke's statement about Beverly. Maybe Thomas tries to get Bree to make his hometown her turf to stop Beverly from causing trouble when she visits Zeke.

I'm having fun brainstorming all the possibilies of Thomas X Bree! Maybe down the road she will shake her insecurities and show him what's under the hoodie lol!

Author's Response: Thanks man. As you can see, I take going into the details of clothing seriously lol. Also, I like the hoodie joke you made about Bree XD. Took me a bit to understand it. Yeah, it does seem likely Bree and Thomas would be a thing, huh? And yeah, Bree does have a large rack. Let's just say they're really BIG. I'd say Bree is a bit tall for a girl. If she had a normal height, I'd put her at 5'7 at most. You could say your story has giving me some ideas on how powerful a gentle giantess can display her power without trying and as gor Blair getting more time... I can only say you might enjoy the future chapters that are yet to come. A stand off against Bree and Beverly over City Block Y, now there's an idea... Thanks for the thought out review, dude. It's always nice to see people point out the subtle things in the story like clothing description oh and good luck witb your stories if you do plan on finishing them. ;)

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2018 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 21

Yo, longtime lurker here.  First off, I want to say you've made an interesting world with a lot of possibilities.  The characters are interesting and your descriptions of them, including their clothes and thoughts, is phenominal and makes it easy to visualize what they look like and how they behave.

Second, I particularly love stories that keep me hungry for what happens next, for more info on the world, lore if you will.  The way you casually drop little worldbuilding details here and there is one of my favorite methods of storytelling since it keeps me guessing and trying to fill in the blanks with my imagination.  Fetish fuel is great and all, but a good story as the meat with the fetish as seasoning and sauce is best in my opinion.  Reeeally looking forward to future parts.



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch, Lightwing! I appreciate how much you appreciate descriptions and possibilities of the story. I'm glad someone enjoys the little worldbuilding here and there.

 

I'll admit, with previous reviews pointing out the blanks that I've made, I've become some what insecure about how long I can carry out the story without ruining it completely but your review gives me some hope I can give everyone the explanations they deserve. Thank you dearly for coming out and giving your time to leave a review. :)

Reviewer: IamtheWalrus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2018 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 21

Hey buddy! This chapter was a god-send to me! For reasons I won't get into, today sucked hard! But seeing this newest chapter certainly breifly lifted my spirits. lol. Also, the reason I haven't responded much since the last chapter is because of my mother having the flu. Anyway, let's move onto the review. One last note, I'm pretty tired so forgive me if this review isn't up to my usual standard. lol. We can always talk later. 

Maybe its just my current state of mind but Celcila struck me as a little nasty this chapter. Granded, most of the times it was understandable or even somewhat warranted, but still. Perphas part of the reason for this opinion is because she was giving my favorite charatcers a hard time? lol. 

Speaking of which, as usual, Gwen and Trisha were the highlights of this chapter for me. Trisha was great with her admiring Celcila, with the feeling appearing to be mutual. lol. I'm not shocked that Trisha is into woman who look like girls, given her relationship with Gwen. And speaking of Gwen, I loved her blunt and nasty quipping with Celcila! lol. 

Tiffany singing "Let it go" was really adorable, and I also liked Anika and Mildred being in awe of how someone who has been quite brutal to them can sing so innocently. Nice little contrast there. lol. 

So, Celcila finally knows that Ankia and Mildred were taken. Barring something shocking happening in the next chapter or so, it appears that they will be leaving this story. As I've said before, I'm conflicted on that idea. But, as I've said before, the opening this leaves for Tiffanty to get a hot 30-something lesbian petist is quite fitting! lol. If you are thinking of going with this idea and would like help with devleoping it, just say so, okay?

Loved the forced nature of Bev's apology and the fact she had a guy up her backside. 

I had kinda of forgotten abnout how imposing Blair was, but I was pleased with that. lol. By the way, roughly how much taller is Blair than most giantesses, like how many feet would you say she has on them? I ask because I'm thinking Anaya should be a simialr height. Also, Blair unknowingly sitting on Ankia and Milderd seems like a fitting last trail. 

Interesting developing having Justin come in to share his sad story. The highlight of that scetion was seeing that Tiffany was pretty much unfazed by it, showing how far she has to go. lol. I'm glad that's the case. Means we get to see her develop a lot more. 

So, great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one! :) 

 



Author's Response:

Hey man. Sorry to hear about the bad day. My life isn't so peachy right now so I feel for you. I recommend your mom gets a glu shot, pronto!

 

I figured you'd call out Cecilia since she was arguing with Gwen lol I felt it was necessary seeing as they have opposite personalities and opposite beliefs of tinies. Again, I might consider your idea and if I do, I"ll be sure to ask more about it via email.

 

I figured Beverly would definitely be the type to give a insincere apology to a tiny she tried to kill and to do it with a tiny up her butt ;) and as for Blair, I'd put her at a 2 feet taller than most giantesses. She's abnormally tall like if you want to use regular height for a giantess who's 5'4, Blair would be 6'11. Yeah, Tiffany still has a lot of work and her callousness to Justin's impairment proved that.

 

Thanks again for your reviews as always, IamtheWalrus

Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 21

Been a long while, but it's here! I'm so glad that this story has finally returned :D And I have this huge review to spout my thoughts I guess. Sit down, grab your popcorn, and prepare to be bored senseless! ^.^

So, what I really loved about these chapters was the further push of the supporting characters towards the spotlight. I really like the progression in how they've been edged in and even though they were abruptly introduced, this time to breathe has definitely been great in developing them all and helping to differentiate them.

Furthermore, Cecilia has 100% revealed what I thought about her with the whole argument over whether or not she has any real friends. That showed a lot of cracks in her very hard persona towards other giants - showing her insecurities with connecting/conversing with people her own size.

Tiffany seems to be sort of getting along with the other group members, and her interactions with Cecilia really put into perspective how much of just a shy and nervous child she really is - especially in situations where she is non-dominant. (Ironically, exactly like how Cecilia puts forward dominance in order to mask her own insecurities). Additionally, the hook at the end is quite enticing - makes me really hope that there are more chapters on the way soon!

Now, before all this I just want to clarify that none of this ruins the story for me, and I hate to be the guy nailing the 'No Fun Allowed' sign on your lawn. But I see you finally explained the whole distribution of media thing. 

I initially thought you were teasing me with Brooke wearing a Nirvana shirt and Adventure Time merch. But I'm glad you fully explained how the media of tinies is so heavily incorporated into the giants lives.

But, like, have you seen that Simpsons episode where Homer goes back in time and has to make sure he doesn't touch anything in case he alters the future - how any miniscule alteration can minorly or drastically change the course of history.

Basically the concept it uses is that if someone were to go back to, say, the year 1990 and bump into someone on their way to work - it may lead to that person missing their train, leading them to be late for work that day, meaning they promise to stay overtime for their boss, meaning they don't go out with co workers that evening which would've been the evening he met his soul mate - so he doesn't have any children or the specific children that would've been born. From that one little bump into someone, there's a huge chain reaction that leads to someone not being born that would've had a huge impact on the people around them. Do you get that theory? Any change not matter how insignificant can completely change the course of history unknowingly. 

So, personally, I can't really get behind the thought that bands like Nirvana, shows like Adventure Time or comics like Deadpool existing identically to how they do in real life. With a gigantic alteration in this universe being of an alternate dimension of giant women going in and out, rampaging through cities would cause more than a few alterations in time.

Like, wouldn't it be extremely possible that Kurt Cobain or Pendleton Ward were living in major cities before their success and were killed in rampages - or any of the people who would've influenced them to make their art.

And also what the giant world would have had significant influence on tiny media considering all the catastrophic attacks.

Like in this universe did catastrophic events like WW2 or other wars happen? With all the giantess rampaging in cities around many countries probably would've had enough on their plate/they might not have been able to go to war with all the costs of damages. 

Though, it's pretty obvious that both have had influence on American media within the last 70+ years - meaning many things have been created or not created due to all those people dying and the cultural/economical changes to many countries in the world. Like its safe to say a lot of anime wouldn't exist nor would a lot of comic books/cartoons that where created in the wartime effort during WW2. (Meaning Disney would be a lot different - possibly no Kingdom Hearts. And Captian America wouldn't have been such an icon - meaning no Deadpool)

So say those events did happen, if there were rampages in cities every other day, wouldn't the impact of them not occur?

And the vast increase of people dying and lives being drastically affected increase exponentially? (Meaning huge changes to culture and entertainment)

God... sorry about all this. I can live with the inconsistencies - they don't ruin the story or anything for me, it's just... are there any other explanations that are coming? Like, are the giants a recent thing? They don't really seem to be with the boy at the end being saved quite a few years ago. But maybe? I don't know, I'm just confused *~* Perhaps I'm just over-analysing this to the extreme.

If they are a recent thing then the Deadpool movie probably wouldn't have been made cos the world would be in such shambles. That would suck :P

Anyway, glad you're back either way, I will always ultimately love this story - even if a few things bother me. Keep on doing your thing! ;>



Author's Response: Hello, MarsyMan. First off, thank you again for leaving another one of your reviews. It was very clever of you to point out a comparison between Tiffany and Cecilia. I don't think anyone has pointed out Tiffany's shyness around other giantesses. You've also made an incredible observation about how the rampages should have made some serious altercations in the normal world. I'm sorry if some things bother you in the story. I know it could be a real pain reading something you might enjoy only for there to be possible plot holes or things in the story that don't add up. Initially, I didn't think Giantess Bully was going to be a story that would be this long and in all honesty when first started writing this, I didn't really have a big plot thought out. Eventually, I started coming up with some ideas that I thought would be really fun but sadly, that was my flaw: Coming up with fun ideas. I didn't really think through the more realistic, non-whimsical things that would explain this and that which is a huge dent in a story I would like to believe, became more elaborate. However, I think I can still give you and other readers some explanations. For one, to give you a hint on your question, noticed how I haven't actually mentioned any real cities. It's usually City Block Y or O. I did also think beforehand about how the giantesses could wipe out the population of normal sized people completely to the point of extinctions. There is also the warp holes that have been brought up in the story. Who is to say there are not other dimensions out there besides the one Thomas, Zeke, Anika and Mildred live in and the one the Giantesses live in? How did the warp holes come into existences? Were they manmade or dare I say, "giantess-made?" ;) Again, I appreciate your concerns about how there are some questionable things in the story. It helps me to know what needs to be address and shows you are involved in the story. :)

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2018 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 21

Whoa! I read the first chapter to this a while back and had seen you updating it pretty consistently, but i had never brought myself to continue reading it for some reason and boy do i feel like a fool. This story is amazing! One of the best on here in my honest opinion. I love how you write the violent scenes so vividly! And while the violet parts are definitely my favorites (and i hope there are many more to come), i still enjoy the story you have woven into it. Can’t wait to continue reading!

Author's Response:

Thank you! ^^ That means a lot. As you already know, I've also enjoyed your Teenager's Plaything story as well.

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