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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2019 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Ana's Miscommunication

Hopefully Ana starts to enjoy her role as a goddess soon ;)

Reviewer: Arkcrono14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2017 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Ana's Miscommunication

I love how cold Ana maybe becoming 60 days is rough is she going to ignore and let them be for that time? Or will she let her anger out on the city?so excited for the future of this story.

Author's Response: Day 60 might fall on a very special day. Keep an eye out.

Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2017 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Ana's Miscommunication

I'm liking the direction Ana is headed! Sixty days seems kinda like a lot  of time (relative to the rest of the story so far) so I'm curious if she stays true to her word or how that time plays out... let me just say I hope Lacy isn't so generous with her nano-nation :) . Also I think your descriptions of Baleares are really good at showing the destruction caused by Ana just by basically doing nothing.

Great job so far! Looking forward to more (as always)



Author's Response: I'm glad you find the descriptions nice. I feel like those are what I struggle writing the most

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