Reviews For A Merciless Sister
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Reviewer: mad dog Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2018 5:14 PM Title: Where am I?

the story was bad,the unaware are the most unenteresting kind, when it is basically about just one character remember she thinks he's a bug is she blind your circle of godDESSES was good but this one was more then bad.

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 8:19 PM Title: Where am I?

Sad to hear your previous response.  This story was really great!  I was looking forward to more from you.

Reviewer: ShadowCross Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 25 2016 12:42 PM Title: Where am I?

This story intriques me. I did very much enjoy it. I feel as though the size setting is wrong. I'd recommend changing it to Nano as you compare the size of the main character to an ant. I'd be interest in working on a story with you if you'd chose. I seem to constanly be coming up with ideas and working through half, but failing halfway though on completeing them. Great short story. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for correcting the size difference. also this was my very first story based on this type of subject so I highly doubt i'll be able to finish another one. But i'll keep you in mind.

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