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Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2016 9:28 PM Title: Epilogue: Daughter's Wedding

Aw Man, ...I hate to see this one end.  I really enjoyed this story.  I think that you did a great job of creating the characters and  keeping them real, too.  Paul ending up with a BBW - Dominatrix, ...hilarious Dude! ;`)

  I especially enjoyed the way that you used Paul, to contrast against Andy, making his 'Deeds' appear so much better; even when he slightly lusted after his own daughter, - compared to Paul, he was a Saint!  Nice work.  

  I'll be looking forward to the Sequel, or anything else that you decide to write, I added you to my 'favorite authors' after reading, chapter three, ...I think, anyway, can't wait to see what other tales you can dream up, this one was just great!

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2016 8:44 PM Title: Epilogue: Daughter's Wedding

Thank you for sharing this with us, dude. The wedding between Eric and Brooke was a nice plot twist. And the respective consummations a great example of stunning contrast.

As for the sequel? Take as long as you like! I can tell you, for a fact, that incessant jotting down of plot bunnies can burn you out, more often than not. Resulting in long creative dry spells between sudden spurts of imaginative fertility.

Thanks, again, and good night. :-)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2016 2:39 PM Title: Epilogue: Daughter's Wedding

One of my all time favorite stories. Well done, buddy. I greatly look forward to whatever you do in the future.
Excellent job,
Diesel

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