[Report This]Date: October 31 2016 1:58 PM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 3)
Only, Half the size, of one of her plugs? And, he's going to sneak into her bedroom...
Poor, poor Paul!
- Savored your eloquent descriptions; as he climbed onto her bed, slowly continuing his journey up onto her magnificent chest. The letters across her butt, disappearing one by one, ...I loved that part -made it easy to imagine- her rolling onto her back.
...all that weight, just missing him as he steps out of the way...
Great storytelling! ;`)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. Brooke is definitely way more woman than Paul can handle, and she's going to show him that before this 5-part chapter is over.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2016 11:58 AM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 3)
And, here, I thought Paul had learned the error of his previous ways. But, he proved just the opposite is true the way he "Brooked" no interference in sneaking into her bedroom.
Hopefully, she'll teach him a much longer-lasting lesson.
Author's Response:
Paul does have an issue objectifying women, but any shrunken man would be attracted to giantess Brooke. He's just unlucky in that he glammed onto the first giantess he has a shot with, who happens to have very determinate goals for her tiny quarry.
Date: October 31 2016 10:30 AM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 3)
Interesting. Enjoyed the conversation about what shrinking was like. For a minute there I thought he went in the wrong room.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
When I first planned this chapter, I wanted Paul to seek out Kimberly but fall into Brooke's clutches by entering HER room on accident. But that changed when I decided that it would be out of character for Kimberly to be sleeping under the same roof as her fiancé. Her parents wouldn't have it.