Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2016 12:56 PM Title: 1.21 inches (Smallest, pt 3)

I've been reading this since ch. 1. I love this story. I have to say though, Andy ditching his voice amplifier is one of the stupidest things I've ever seen a shrunken person do, its ridiculous. That and the lack of concern for Andy's safety after Kimberly lost him was really unrealistic. Dont get me wrong, I know this fetish, lots of times I even go straight to the sexy time too, but if the story actually has a plot, with characters that were developed to be gentle and caring ( as I prefer them), having them go straight to sex mode after finding a lost tiny seems off, especially since in previous chapters Kim has been more concerned with Andy's welfare. It comes off as her character being inconsistent.

Author's Response:

It's established in the "Enbosomed" chapter that going swimming with the voice amplifier would short it out. Andy takes out his voice amplifier here to avoid breaking it in Kimberly's wet mouth. If he still had it while in her mouth, it would malfunction and she wouldn't able to hear him during or after their mouthplay.

I don't understand what you mean about the lack of concern for Andy's safety, as Kim was basically haunted by the fact that Andy was missing the whole time. It drove her to distraction while her mom and bro were over. And she took as much care as she could when he went into her mouth the first time.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2016 2:17 PM Title: 1.21 inches (Smallest, pt 3)

Normally, I'd make a pun here. Something along the lines of "Boob-a-licious!" or "Andy certainly wins the booby prize." But, that would only demean this fine, touching chapter.

So, I won't. ;-)