[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 2:54 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
In the words of Switch from The Matrix: "Not like this, not like this"
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 12:19 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
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English translation: I honestly didn't see that coming.
Date: August 31 2016 11:50 AM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Nice story.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2016 5:06 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Omg ! He's stupid ! *_* Amazing chapter !
Date: August 30 2016 4:00 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Another awesome chapter and series overall!
[Report This]Date: August 28 2016 12:20 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
I want the suit love this story *_*
[Report This]Date: August 22 2016 6:22 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Kudos to Kimberly for resisting so far. Ya got me on the edge of my seat!
[Report This]Date: August 22 2016 12:42 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
I'm not a fan of Breasts, or at least I didn't think I was until this story. I'm also not fond of Gentle, but you seem to have almost convinced me.
I hate being the type of user that asks for certain content, but would there be any hope down the line of you doing any of the 'Butt' category for this story?
If it detracts from the plot you have, don't do it, I'm loving this story. But if the plot was flexible in any way, I'd love to see the 'Butt' category incorporated.
Thornton
Date: August 20 2016 6:03 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
I love this story :D. Keep it up :D
[Report This]Date: August 18 2016 6:51 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Awesome stuff!!!
Date: August 18 2016 6:34 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Wonderful story so far. The characters feel real and deep, and it's not the most conventional way of telling a story I've seen, somewhere between vignettes of different days of action and a concise narrative format that leaves out all the middle bits.
Date: August 17 2016 4:56 AM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Really neat, I greatly enjoyed these three chapters. Love the vignette format and your concentration on these two specific characters amidst a larger story.
Just the right level of character detail, and I'm quickly attached to your protagonists.
Date: August 16 2016 11:35 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
hey really well done! i was wondering if you were planning to incorporate some unaware gts chapters when the protagonist is doll size or smaller? he might get stuck and unable to move or mistaken for another object. You have writing talent!
[Report This]Date: August 16 2016 12:26 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Loved the cliff-hanger. :-)
All that was missing was the classic sound effect: "GASP!"
Date: August 16 2016 9:45 AM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Well this one will be a gem in the future. I think the biggest thing right off the bat I liked about your narrative is that you didn't make the main guy completely focused on the focal girl too fast.
Keeping it slow and having good development is great sometimes, and you are doing it well! Good luck for future updates