Reviews For Melanie's School
Reviewer: ZmanAttackz Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2018 12:18 AM Title: Love
Date: December 30 2018 12:18 AM Title: Love
Awesome story wish it were continued
Reviewer: Soul for Soles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2016 10:16 PM Title: Love
Date: May 15 2016 10:16 PM Title: Love
I like this. My favorite line is "The two titanic, eager, feet that were now locked on to getting him under their embrace as soon as possible were going get what they wanted". I like writing that shows the feet having a sort of mind of their own, with their own emotions and desires.
Anyway, I hope Mel picks up running every morning and she uses Alisa and Pete as her insoles every time.