[Report This]Date: February 28 2016 6:00 PM Title: Pit of Despair
A masterfully poignant installment.
A hilarious chapter title. :-)
Date: February 28 2016 3:53 AM Title: Salty Slide
Excellent, I would want to explore Lucy also. I imagine that she looks like January Jones.
There are great dangers in being so small. Your descriptions are terrific.
Enjoyed it,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 10:57 PM Title: The Test
Great story, I like where it's headed
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 7:14 PM Title: Salty Slide
Oh, man! If I wasn't certain you already had one or two things planned, involving Lucy's sisters, I would seriously think that she was going to become a widow by the end of chapter 6.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 10:55 AM Title: Exploration
Excellent.
the psychiatrist machine could break, leaving Kelvin that size. It will be fun if Lucy discover some treachery and punish him.
Date: February 27 2016 3:33 AM Title: Exploration
Such a cool story. Love the different stages of shrinking. I would not have reenlarged the cat if I were him. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Fantastic,
Diesel
Date: February 27 2016 12:32 AM Title: The Test
Love what you've written here! May i ask how much unaware content you're going to do over the remainder of the story? I'd love to see the other characters mistake the protagonist for a doll and possibly never discover kevin's secret because unaware is favourite type of story.
Author's Response: Unaware is probably my favourite content and when I do it I put more effort into it than my other categories. All of my stories contain unaware content, so I can say that there will be plenty.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2016 9:20 PM Title: Unexpected Plans
P.S.---So I was wrong about Keira being a cheerleader. Soccer players are just as athletic...as I'm sure you'll soon have her demonstrate. ;-)
[Report This]Date: February 26 2016 9:18 PM Title: Exploration
Suggestion for the title of chapter 5.
"Thigh Noon."
[Report This]Date: February 26 2016 9:13 PM Title: Unexpected Plans
So, Darcy the supermodel is the older sister. Which means Keira is probably the teenage younger sister. Perhaps even a nubile cheerleader in high school!
I wonder which of them will cease to be unaware of him, first?
[Report This]Date: February 26 2016 9:09 PM Title: Getting Ideas
See? My previous review was right.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2016 9:06 PM Title: The Test
She guesses? Of course, it's going to be fun! It's...written in the stars.
;-D
[Report This]Date: February 26 2016 6:09 PM Title: Unexpected Plans
Excelent.
Continues...
[Report This]Date: February 24 2016 1:57 PM Title: Getting Ideas
Another great chapter! Can't wait for more fun & shenanigans!
[Report This]Date: February 24 2016 3:53 AM Title: Getting Ideas
Liking the start. Very, very curious as to how the wife turns out. Keep it up
[Report This]Date: February 23 2016 7:47 PM Title: Getting Ideas
Very good!
Lucy could discover some secret of Kevin, a mistress. Preventing it from growing and punishing him.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2016 4:18 PM Title: The Test
An interesting start! Looks like it's going to be fun! Hope to see more of this, especially if it contains F/f!
Date: February 22 2016 12:09 AM Title: The Test
great start! hope you continue this story (y)
Date: February 21 2016 6:24 PM Title: The Test
Nice! Keep up the great work! Would love to see Kevin get to be like 1/2 inch or smaller! but good story. so far.