Date: July 16 2016 9:03 AM Title: The Test
Fantastic writing. I am so eager to read the upcoming chapters since I really hope that you continue with ths story.
Date: May 29 2016 12:23 AM Title: The Test
Is it continuing on?
Later,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: May 17 2016 7:03 AM Title: The Test
I like this story a lot, and often come to check just to see if this is updated. I like the writing style and ofcourse the un-aware. Please keep up the good work and dont listen to the few who dont like it. you have big fans out there waiting for you to come up with more gold. and if silver, Happy too!
[Report This]Date: May 16 2016 12:48 PM Title: The Test
Your characters are absurdly inconsistent to the point where the story has become nonsensical.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2016 3:15 PM Title: The Test
Very good!!!
Continues, Fart, Vore, Crush.
Date: May 04 2016 12:11 AM Title: The Test
So far, you have a very good narrative and the story flows quite well, and I am exited for the next chapter of the story. However, I feel that althought your descriptions of character emotions and what drives their decisions is on point, I feel as though your lacking in emotional character interactions, particulatly after lucy injured kevin during sex. She borderline raped him and although they may love each other, I still feel that it would be important for her to have made a straightforward apology for that, or to show how kevin felt about her losing her self control. Maybe he would feel some resentment towards her? Possibly, he would be even more afraid of her or get mad at her. I'm keeping in mind that you wanted some kinky-giantess-unaware-sex-scenes, but wouldn't they also be useful for furthering the plot and/or character development? All in all, great story.
Date: May 02 2016 10:25 PM Title: The Test
Love the story it would be awesome if perhaps Kevin rolled into a worse position in the panties, and maybe also she has a gassy day.
Date: May 01 2016 11:59 PM Title: The Test
*signs petition for you to continue this story* this is my favorite story. you unaware writing style is perfect!
[Report This]Date: March 13 2016 3:17 PM Title: The Test
P.S.---thanks for,at least, amending my suggestion. ;-D
[Report This]Date: March 02 2016 6:22 PM Title: The Test
I hope this story has a lot left because it's really getting good.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 10:57 PM Title: The Test
Great story, I like where it's headed
Date: February 27 2016 12:32 AM Title: The Test
Love what you've written here! May i ask how much unaware content you're going to do over the remainder of the story? I'd love to see the other characters mistake the protagonist for a doll and possibly never discover kevin's secret because unaware is favourite type of story.
Author's Response: Unaware is probably my favourite content and when I do it I put more effort into it than my other categories. All of my stories contain unaware content, so I can say that there will be plenty.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2016 9:06 PM Title: The Test
She guesses? Of course, it's going to be fun! It's...written in the stars.
;-D
[Report This]Date: February 23 2016 4:18 PM Title: The Test
An interesting start! Looks like it's going to be fun! Hope to see more of this, especially if it contains F/f!
Date: February 22 2016 12:09 AM Title: The Test
great start! hope you continue this story (y)
Date: February 21 2016 6:24 PM Title: The Test
Nice! Keep up the great work! Would love to see Kevin get to be like 1/2 inch or smaller! but good story. so far.