[Report This]Date: February 23 2016 8:44 PM Title: Escape?
Adam's little voice is only half-right. If he _truly_ didn't matter to Amanda, she wouldn't have rescued him, at all! She would've either crushed him underfoot, first thing, or just plain ignored him, altogether. English translation: Amanda really _does_ like him. She's just being initially overzealous (like a little girl with a brand new Xmas toy).
Thanks for posting a new chapter, so quickly. And have a nice day. :-)
Author's Response:
Quite true. I probaly should have been more specific. Adam's wants an desires, hopes and dreams dont matter. His body giving pleasure to her is all that she cares about and all she wants from him. His life as a person, is over; he has no value to her. But as a toy; He is more important than he ever was or would have been as a person.
But as far as the second half of the comment goes, yeah. But what happens when your toy malfunctions? Amanda is going to fix it, or break it... What side will Adam land on I wonder?
(you listen here you little punk. NEVER, parody my closing greeting again or I'll castrate you.)
(Just kidding, thanks for that!)
Thanks for your review, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 22 2016 7:17 PM Title: A Realization of the Situaion
I feel like I am the voice in his head. I like his situation, I would enjoy being her toy. This is awesome!
I like how you used a slash to identify the voice's lines. Very clever.
Loving the new spot by the way. Much much more comfy than feet and much more sexy too.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review man!
1- Adam is either the luckiest of the unluckiest bastard ever. Only reason Amanda found him was becasue she dropped her phone. (That black monolith that dropped from the heavens that responded to adams question of how could his situation get worse.)
2-That was an annoying part. Something I didnt realize is that the other slash isnt there to close the sentance. I didn't know it wasnt there. I hope people who read this understnad this point.
3- Tomatoe tomata. personally I wouldnt have minded being under her feet for part of the day, but yes, being on the biggest softest pillow ever is pretty great. And 100% more sexy... I mean Adam has some with her tit! but as for being at her feet, Being a toe ring wasnt that bad, and it was fine under amanda's toes until she decided to play stress ball with her toy. After Adam slipped though, no question. Amanda had to move him, her little toy was hurt. She wouldnt want him to be in pain.
4- Neither can I.
Thank you very much, Have a Great Day!
Date: February 22 2016 4:04 PM Title: A Bad Night
This story is fantastic! The relationship between the characters is great and I love the interaction. She's a true goddess. No wonder he begins to like it at her feet. Very nice, keep on, love your style.
Author's Response:
Hey man, thank you very much for your comments and review! I appreciate that you enjoy Amanda and Adam's interactions. Ive never written a story about giantess' before, so sometimes its hard to plan in my head. But thank you very much.
I would like to just make the point, dont mistake Adam's feelings. He does not like being by Amanda's feet. He likes being near Amanda when she isnt trying to hhurt him, and he would rather not tempt her to hurt him in any manner. Thus far, he is simply being complyant to the wishes of his captor, he doesnt want to anger her. Adam is thinking of escape, but so far, he hasnt really seen a chance. If Amanda were to have worn a pair of slide off uggs today, there is a signifigant chance Adam would have tried to get away if he wasnt inside Amanda's sock. Maybe Adam will enjoy it at some point, I mean the voice in his head is pushing harder and harder each time. Its only a matter of time before Adam gets desperate or he submits.
Anyway man, thank you for your review, I appreciate it. Thank you very much, Have a Great Day!
Date: February 22 2016 3:53 PM Title: A Realization of the Situaion
Oh damn. Maybe I kind of agree with the voice in his head ;) But if Amanda is just a honeytrap, my God is Adam going to regret staying. But I have a feeling that's not going to happen
Author's Response:
Well the way I see it, hes probaly going to experience both. For some time, hes going to regret. But rember what Amanda said, she'll take care of him, and that this is the best thing that could have happened to him. In the long term (Should he not get lost or be stupid and actually manage to get away... I wont give the plot away) He might just come to be one with the voice in his head, where they are one and the same. But hey, thats all of us, maybe Adam feels different about being a toy to a beautiful girl seventy times (roughly) his size.
Is Amanda a honey trap? Maybe, maybe not. Is adam in for an interesting experience? Oh Hell yes.
Thank you very much for your comments and review, Have a Great Day.
Date: February 22 2016 3:20 PM Title: A Realization of the Situaion
Littletoy and Asukafan were the moderators for the original Giantess Planet. They also (all too briefly) ran a spin-off site called "Littlefan Productions."
Author's Response:
You sir, should change your name to mr Punny References. Because that is what you seem best at lol.
That is actually quite interesting, really cool to know.
Thank you very much, Have a Great Day.
[Report This]Date: February 22 2016 12:24 PM Title: A Realization of the Situaion
The only one who found this more arousing than me was Adam's alter-ego. Still, I can't help wondering if the real Littletoy would also enjoy this (lol!).
Author's Response:
I like imagining the voice in his head is a lot like the one in Birdman. Gravely and dark.
Im not sure if you mean that Littletoy is a character from a different story, or a different author. Im a bit confused, i appologize about that.
And yeah, Adam's inner voice is the part of him he dosent like to think about. The part that he keeps yelling at Adam, the inner voice, he is the half of Adam who might have just given up and decided "you know what, This is pretty good, I can live with this." He liked it because Adam gave in. But maybe arroused isnt the right way to describe it. Excited maybe, that Adam gave in. The question is how is Amanda going to take Adam giving in, and sprinkling his seed on her nipple? she is happy, but is she going to take this as a sign of him submitting? Only time will tell.
Thank you for the review, Have a Great Day!
Date: February 21 2016 11:56 PM Title: From Bad to Not So Bad
Now that's a better place to be. Didn't you say something about taking suggestions? If you put mine in the story, then thanks so much. Now I wonder, what "work" does he have to do. I guess I'll find out
Author's Response:
Hey man. I have taken the suggestions, and both will come up sooner or later, yours included. And that work he has to do... well, Adam might not like it so much, it'll really tucker him out. So yeah, hope you enjoyed, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 21 2016 10:02 PM Title: From Bad to Not So Bad
Oh, brother! I can just picture Amanda's reaction to finding him, there. A half-angry/half-amused demand as to what he thinks he's doing. And I can just hear Adam's feeble reply.
"Would you believe I was hot and thirsty and just wanted a quick sip of milk?"
Author's Response:
Hey man thanks for your review. Very much appreciated.
I mean I would have done that, but that umplies that she is pregnant. I dont think Adam is that dumb. I know this is fantasy. (Adam isnt dead from loss of heat of oxygen being to large for his lungs to handle, he was stepped on and didnt immediatekt explode everywhere, ect.) but when I was sriting, I wasnt really thinking that sorry to say haha.
Thank you for you review, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 20 2016 8:19 AM Title: A Desperate Situation
Interesting development, to say the least! What's next, I wonder? A bisexual three-way with GuyGoneSmall's Melissa?
Author's Response:
Only one way to truly find out i suppose, the Next CHapter! Anything is possible there.
well, two things actually. That and Adam getting out of this anytime soon. Nope, he wont be getting a break anytime soon from Amanda.
Thanks for your review, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 20 2016 3:24 AM Title: A Desperate Situation
I just had this thought of Amanda giving Adam a massage with just her feet. I was picturing her wearing pantyhose and just rubbing her feet on his body. It will be a nice reward after servicing her for a whole day.
Just curious, isn't Amanda's foot too big to bite? It's like trying to bite a wall. Her toes are slightly curved like giant yoga balls and even those are hard to bite. I'm surpriesed that Amanda even felt that. Then again, it must have been a good bite becuase of he blood that came out.
I like how she wraps him around her toe. However I thought when she said she will "wrap him", I thought she was going to get some tape or something . Lol. More like Adam wrapped himself to the toe.
If Amanda wants to punish Adam, she can leave him inside a high heel since those things are too tall for him to climb out of. It can serve as a timeout. (Or even as a bed, so in the morning Amanda puts her shoes on and surprise!)
Maybe Amanda gets generous and puts Adam on other places on her. So far, she gives kisses when she is in a good mood. I wonder if they will be more closer than just kissing soon. (Yes, I have a naughty mind.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey man, thanks for the review. Im just going to respond to your message in order numerically.
1- Well see. After all, Amanda is just living her life now with a pet/toy at the whim of her pleasure. Will we see it? i dont know. (Well I do, but I dont wish to spoil all your fun)
2- Yes. But keep in mind, Adam bites her foot when her foot is entierly wrapped around him. There is nowhere for him to move, and he will asphyxiate if she dosen't let go. And he only bites like, the smallest area possible. And the only reason Amanda would notice is because her nerves would be supprised. She's just enjoying playing with her toy when suddenly OUCH! Something must be up with Adam. Better go check in on him. ANd that blood is mostly from Adam coughing it up after over an hour of being abused by Amandas toes, its his, not Amanda's.
3- Yeah. But they're in a bathroom. She probaly would have if she had time to get to her room, but she has to get to her next class. And Adam obeying is in part what ends up sparking his realization that he shouldn't be. That's where his inner voice comes out. Also, when your giant RA gives you an order in a bathroom, its a good idea to listen, lest she flush you down the drain lol.
4- That's not a half bad idea... Maybe Amanda is listening
5- Maybe, but I think you'll be supprised when she decides to introduce Adam to your naughty idea. But a better question is, what if she gets ina bad mood with Adam? something he probaly dosent like to even imagine the horrors of.
6- Thanks, the next one is in development, along with the one after that. Adam has a long road ahead of him. Also, for anyone who reads these for spoilers in the story, the stuff with the feet will be taking a break real soon.
Thank you very much man (or lady, I wont judge) Your comments and insights are much appreciated. Thank You Very Much, Have a Great Day!
Date: February 20 2016 3:08 AM Title: A Desperate Situation
Doesn't it get a bit boring after a whole day of between toes? I mean, if you're between breasts or something, he and Amanda can talk, or at least Amanda can keep an eye on her "beloved" toy. Oh well, why should she care.
Author's Response:
Very true. Don't worry, days only half over, still lot of time to go quite wrong for Adam. And If adam gets moved up in the world, its probaly for a different reason. Besides, as far as Amanda is concerned, this is her toy. A living toy. She'd rather not that Adam get hurt or heaven forbid die. I mean if he did she wouldnt have a fun toy to play with anymore.
Anyway, thanks for the review, Hope you are liking the story, and Have a Great Day!
Date: February 19 2016 2:41 AM Title: A Bad Night
Great job, i like where this is going, keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your Review. I hope that you enjoy the next chapter that's up.
I hope you are enjoying the story. Thank You, Have a Great Day!
Date: February 19 2016 1:31 AM Title: A Bad Night
I really like this story, hope to see more butt action!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. And perhaps, just maybe, there shall be more.
Again thank you for your review, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 18 2016 6:43 PM Title: A Rude Awakening
Well, "semi-gentle" is definitely preferable to "full-fledge sadistic," right off the bat. So, yeah, he made the right call by _not_ trying to escape while she was in the shower. But, sooner or later, she's going to be tempted to show off her little pet to one of the other college girls she gives advice to. Which means he's either going to be shared with one of them, right off the bat.. Or one of them is going to be "full-fledged jealous" enough to try and permanently steal him away for herself!
The only way to ultimately prove me wrong on both counts is to post chapter 4, ASAP. ;-)
Author's Response:
No Puns in this post?! I'm almost disapointed haha.
Yes, Adam is no dope, Amanda would not be happy if she found her now toy trying to escape after just giving in. That is to say the absolute least of how she would feel.
And About the second half... Lets just say I add my tags accurately... Be they sooner or later, I wouldnt add a tag without that coming up in the story.
And I think regardless of me proving you wrong or not, your going to get a satisfactory answer in Chapter 4 either way.
Thank you for your review, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 17 2016 6:58 PM Title: A Difficult Choice
Great story!
I hope you continue becuase I like this.
When I thought panties, I was thinking about the front, not the back. Well, I guess she prefers dominance over pleasure right now.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoyed the next chapter!
Yeah. It's kind of the breaking in phase, cant give him rewards until he really accepts his place at her feet. ]
Also about this story continuing, this will continue for a while, I'll update as regularly as I can. Im in school now, so I'm a little bit strapped for time. But this story will have a conclusive end. Weather its a happy ending for Adam or not is going to be fun to find out haha!
I hope you enjoy this story, I hope you are enjoying the characters and how the plot is going. Thank you for your review, and Have a Great Day!
Date: February 17 2016 12:33 AM Title: A Difficult Choice
Nice chapter, loved reading it. Amanda is definitley an intersting one. If she wants him to love being a toy, maybe she shouldn't say "You do whatever I tell you to do, no matter how horrible it is. When I say do ten laps around my pee, you do it." I doubt that will happen (right?) but if she told him to do that, I guess he has to. At least she cares about him XD
Author's Response:
I don't know, I guess only time will tell haha.
And about the "she cares for him" part, quite. She might treat him like dirt, but he's her dirt. I am trying to keep Amanda as a semi-decent character, I'm trying to keep her somewhat consistent in the middle between violent and gentle (But leaning towards the latter.) My hope above all in this story is that all of those who read it dont say to themselves; "Gee Amanda is an awfully written character,"
Anyway, thank you for your review, and Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 16 2016 6:18 PM Title: A Difficult Choice
Great addition!
Author's Response:
Thank You AdamX for your comment. Ones like yours mean a lot to me that at least one person enjoys my writing. Thank you so so so much, and Have a Great Day.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2016 5:41 PM Title: A Difficult Choice
Either that, or he's the "butt" of some impractical joke.*
*Sorry! Couldn't resist. :-)
Author's Response:
You and your puns. Thanks for the review again, very much appreciated.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2016 8:03 AM Title: A Bad Night
I head for the nearest American Express office.*
Seriously, though: nice one-shot. Thanks for sharing it...and welcome aboard!
*Sorry! The title reminded me of those old traveler check commercials with the late, great Karl Malden.
Author's Response:
Hey, thank you very much for leaving a review, I very much appreciate it. I had no idea that that was an American Express comercial. Damn thats a long time ago now. Again thank you for the review, and the interesting tidbit of information. Have a great day.
Date: February 15 2016 3:40 AM Title: A Bad Night
Kiss them toes, great story so far hope you continue it
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Im keeping a tally for how many people say what Adam should do in the comments, and your input is the first one lol. If I decide to continue this story (I might, if I do, I have it written out.) I share your sentiments, I would probaly wait a little and think, but in the end, Amanda is probaly the best bet for survival.
Anyway, thank you for your comment, and have a great day!