Date: March 10 2016 1:55 AM Title: Ultimate Tasks and News of Rewards
my prediction was correct! yay :D. can't wait till the threesome! that's whats coming right?
[Report This]Date: March 05 2016 5:26 PM Title: Ultimate Tasks and News of Rewards
So, Amanda's finally forgiven Adam?
Oh, "Joy!"
Author's Response:
Yeah. And the joy wont stop comming. Now that Adam is devoted to his new owner, the joy will be raining down on him like a foot comng down into a pair of pantyhose for a long long day of class and a date would. (Hint, that is a lot.)
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[Report This]Date: March 05 2016 4:22 PM Title: Ultimate Tasks and News of Rewards
Adam just dove in there like a champ. Isn't he afraid of it? I would be. I bet a giant vagina would look like a giant moving animal ready to eat you.
Great job on describing the vagina. It felt very realistic. Many times I see people describe it like a cave or something when their main character goes inside it. I mean, the pink, darkness, constant tightness, and that it goes on forever because he doesn't know where the end is.
Does Adam even realize that Amanda is going out with a girl? I was expecting maybe a talk with the voice where they discuss that maybe Amanda isn't interested in Adam sexually since she said she was going on a date with Jennifer.
Hmm. I sense a threesome coming up. Adam is getting lucky Friday night. Hope Amanda's feet don't ruin his day tomorrow. haha!
I like the use of pantyhose here. Also, I couldn't help but laugh when you wrote "tumble down, down, down, down". I mean, it's true, he must have been tumbling down for a while to get to the bottom. If he thought a sock was hard to climb out of, good luck with this pantyhose.
Good chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
1- Probaly haha. But to quote the great movie Vacation, Adam has to also be saying; "This is crazy, this is crazy, this is crazy." WHen he is getting ready to dive in.
2-Thanks. Sme stories on here make me feel like the author might not really get what its like. (Some not all or even most) And the forever part:I mean adam is one inch tall. This is titanic compared to him.
3- No, not till she told him. That chat with the voice might come up, but in a different way. And Amanda kind of doesnt like Adam sexually. He is a toy to her. She is using him as such. I could replace Adam with a girl and Amanda would still do what she is doing to a girl. Amanda isn't seing boy or girl when the 'toy' is hers, its just a toy designed to serve her every whim and pleasure.
4- Probaly will when he is trapped in there at her 9:00 class till whenever Amanda and Jennifer get back from their date.
5- He would need luck, but after being used as a sex toy twice today, Adam is beat. Time to hit the hey.
Thank you for reading Have a Great Day!