[Report This]Date: February 29 2016 8:53 PM Title: A Shower and an Agreement
Yes! Yes! Keep going with this!
I love the phrase "you excited little guy". It makes me giddy.
Also, the part where he was used as soap we awesome. I kept imagining him just sliding up and down her curves on her sexy body.
Not to mention the tape, and then the thong! It's just gets better and better! Then she wants him there for the rest of the night? Yes! Perfect!
Best chapter so far and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
1- I will, don't worry.
2- He was. The dream of mortal men.
3- Not just the night... Till like, 7-8 tomorrow.
4- Thanks. I agree, I liked to write this one the most so far. But I feel that by the end It will still be a top ten.
Thanks for your review, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 29 2016 5:06 PM Title: A Shower and an Agreement
Considering his size and the amount of jogging and aerobic exercising she did? I would have to call his acceptance of the "inevitable" the end result of a "1200 Step" program.*
*Ba-DUM-boom!
Author's Response:
Oh you! *laugh track*
And 1200 step is low I think.
Also, if you think about it, Adam's voice can be attributed to this. If you belive that Adam is still just a person, he might just be living concussed. I mean he takes crushing force on his body all day, but he gets right back up. But it's not difficult to imagine that when he hit his head, or he was getting squeezed or under a lack of oxygen or when Amanda was walking he hit his head AGAIN. So this voice could be infinite possibilities, alien infection from space that has taken ressidence in his brain, its him going crazy, a by product of a concussion, or a million other explanations. Honestly I wrote that argument a while ago. I wanted to save it till there was a good time. So Today was it.
And yes. This is, no joke, Adam accepting this situation.
Thanks for your review, have a Great Day!