Date: February 26 2016 2:44 AM Title: A Fight
Good chapter, but I don't understand the "fight". Was it explaining Amanda's punishment or the /guy/ calling him a fucking idiot and all that. I might've misread something lol
Author's Response:
Fight isn't the right word, but I couldn;t think of a better name honestly. I'd have liked to call it Rant, but Fight sounded better. Very sorry about the missleading title. Still, hope you enjoyed.
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[Report This]Date: February 25 2016 7:57 PM Title: A Fight
Very good!
Farts...
Author's Response:
Maybe? Maybe not?
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[Report This]Date: February 25 2016 5:39 PM Title: A Fight
P.S.---I know you're going to try your hardest to prove my prediction wrong. But, I really don't think that's possible! :-(
Author's Response:
Oh... We'll see. I mean Adam is like a tiny breathing piece of Iron. Tough, lots of stamina, ect. It'll be hard, but he can do it.
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[Report This]Date: February 25 2016 12:34 PM Title: A Fight
So...where was the fight? She put him on her ass and the voice has given Adam a rant. A fight usually is back and forth and Adam didn't really argue much.
Yes! Tape! Now he is really forced to worship it. This is going to be an interesting 3 hours for Adam.
I wonder what Amanda has in store for him. She always is full of surprises.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: 1- the title A Fightvwas more interesting than A Rant. Oops. Sorry
2- maybe. You'll see
3- It's no good for Adam. Not at all.
Thanks for your review, Have a Great Day!
(Sorry this is short. I'm sort of busy right now, not a lot of time to give a detailed response. Sorry
[Report This]Date: February 25 2016 7:58 AM Title: A Fight
Nope! Uh-uh! Sorry; I don't see it. I really don't see him surviving till the end of chapter 10.
I say Amanda is going to get carried away with herself and butt-grind him to a literally bloody pulp! :-(