Date: February 24 2016 10:30 PM Title: Learning Curves Are Painful
Amanda isn't being as nasty as I expected. I mean, she would've put Adam in her sock the first night if the underwear wasn't chosen. I would think she's more sad than mad
Author's Response:
Amanda isn't being mean, no your right. But keep in mind, she is threatening Adam with a pretty serious situation: Love me or I'll give you to a girl who won;t treat you nearly a tenth as well as I do. She is more trying to make Adam hers, essentially brainwashing him. That's her plan. Obviously she dosent want to get rid of him, but If he wont accept her, She will make him regret it. But she is very sad. Her toy lied, he tried to escape and he almost did if not for her timely arrival. Poor Amanda lol.
On a side I'm thinking of putting one of the next chapters in the view of Amanda. Just so everyone can see things from her perspective and how she is taking all of this. I mean the poor thing almost lost her favorite toy.
(Also I'm considering doing this because I wrote myself into a wall and need to move time along. If anyone is opposed to this message me or leave a comment. Of not, Amanda Chapter will go up as one of the next few chapters)
Thanks for your comment and review, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 24 2016 7:23 PM Title: Learning Curves Are Painful
First off, I don't mind how you respond to my reviews. In fact, it actually helps so I can tell what you are responding too.
Second, I'm not really the biggest fan of feet, as you can tell, but you definately make feet seem sexy in this story.
Third, there was a scene where she puts a pen cap on Adam's chest, and says that he has to massage her. What happened to the cap? I thought he was going to use it to massage her.
Then, what happened at the end? Can you clarify what happened? Is her foot also inside the sock? Is he just inside a sock? If he fell into the sock, how is he looking at another sock in her hand? Why would he be running to her toes? I'm just confused. I'm sure I will figure it out. (Or I misread something.)
The punishment doesn't seem that bad. Massaging and kissing toes seem kinda lighter than I expected. Maybe the voice is right. She is gentle! Maybe...
Lastly, I love the rapid posting of each chapter as well as the long responses to reviews. Most authors just say a simple "glad you liked it" or a "thanks for the review" type of thing. I'm happy that you actually engage with your readers.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter! (Probably tomorrow!)
Author's Response:
1- That's good.
2- Uhh... Thanks. I am confused as to how I do that. I don't really think I do to be honest. I'll take the complement though haha. ANd don't worry not everything revolves around Amanda's feet. There are some differences to break up the monotiny.
3- She puts the cap back on her pen and does her work. Adam is being punished, there is no way Amanda will be giving him any mercy. If he wants to apologize to her, he will have to work hard, no help, no mercy. Else he'll be gone.
4- I see your second comment, but let me answer the whole thing, just in case anyone might not have understood it either. AManda put him in a shoe that has lots of fuzz in it. She put a worn sock in with Adam to 'keep him company' and to make sure he dosent try and get away... dirty bastard tried to get away once, might try again, especially to avoid her punishment.
5- Yeah it does. Imagine being one inch tall. Amanda wears BIG shoes, her feet are titanic to Adam. Its a punishment because Adam has to push as hard as he can against her feet to please her. Imagine that for a moment will you? Labor is no fun, but two and a half hours of it without any stopping is not fun. Try mixing cement or chop a tree down at that size. Doing it for a little is not easy, hours on end is a nightmare. Physically, how long can Adam give 100% maximum effort? not that long. He would barely finish one foot in the time he would be working that hard. Its just my opinion, but that's me. And the kissing thing is more humiliation.
6- Thanks. I see that, and i don't get why. I love conversing with 'fans' (If I can call all you who like this story that) On ideas, clearing up confusion, reviewing suggestions, all that stuff.
7- Maybe. I have to drive pretty much all day tomorrow, so I ight not get a chance, but If I don't there will be two on friday or saturday. Or BOTH! I have the time. If you really wan't to know I write the next chapter the moment after I put the current one up, halfawy through I stop, and finish it the next day. Ideas and suggestions/sceen ideas come in better this way, and I can accomodate to them. It allows me to see what you guys want in the story. Maybe that's to much, But I like to talk with all you guys.
Anyway, thanks for your review, very much appreciated. Thanks, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 24 2016 12:31 PM Title: Learning Curves Are Painful
So, I guess it's safe to say that Adam's Wednesday and Thursday are NOT going to be great days?
;-D
Author's Response:
Oh you wish. Adam is going to be in an actual hell. You might say it'll be a pain in the ass.