Date: February 21 2016 11:56 PM Title: From Bad to Not So Bad
Now that's a better place to be. Didn't you say something about taking suggestions? If you put mine in the story, then thanks so much. Now I wonder, what "work" does he have to do. I guess I'll find out
Author's Response:
Hey man. I have taken the suggestions, and both will come up sooner or later, yours included. And that work he has to do... well, Adam might not like it so much, it'll really tucker him out. So yeah, hope you enjoyed, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 21 2016 10:02 PM Title: From Bad to Not So Bad
Oh, brother! I can just picture Amanda's reaction to finding him, there. A half-angry/half-amused demand as to what he thinks he's doing. And I can just hear Adam's feeble reply.
"Would you believe I was hot and thirsty and just wanted a quick sip of milk?"
Author's Response:
Hey man thanks for your review. Very much appreciated.
I mean I would have done that, but that umplies that she is pregnant. I dont think Adam is that dumb. I know this is fantasy. (Adam isnt dead from loss of heat of oxygen being to large for his lungs to handle, he was stepped on and didnt immediatekt explode everywhere, ect.) but when I was sriting, I wasnt really thinking that sorry to say haha.
Thank you for you review, Have a Great Day!