[Report This]Date: February 17 2016 6:58 PM Title: A Difficult Choice
Great story!
I hope you continue becuase I like this.
When I thought panties, I was thinking about the front, not the back. Well, I guess she prefers dominance over pleasure right now.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoyed the next chapter!
Yeah. It's kind of the breaking in phase, cant give him rewards until he really accepts his place at her feet. ]
Also about this story continuing, this will continue for a while, I'll update as regularly as I can. Im in school now, so I'm a little bit strapped for time. But this story will have a conclusive end. Weather its a happy ending for Adam or not is going to be fun to find out haha!
I hope you enjoy this story, I hope you are enjoying the characters and how the plot is going. Thank you for your review, and Have a Great Day!
Date: February 17 2016 12:33 AM Title: A Difficult Choice
Nice chapter, loved reading it. Amanda is definitley an intersting one. If she wants him to love being a toy, maybe she shouldn't say "You do whatever I tell you to do, no matter how horrible it is. When I say do ten laps around my pee, you do it." I doubt that will happen (right?) but if she told him to do that, I guess he has to. At least she cares about him XD
Author's Response:
I don't know, I guess only time will tell haha.
And about the "she cares for him" part, quite. She might treat him like dirt, but he's her dirt. I am trying to keep Amanda as a semi-decent character, I'm trying to keep her somewhat consistent in the middle between violent and gentle (But leaning towards the latter.) My hope above all in this story is that all of those who read it dont say to themselves; "Gee Amanda is an awfully written character,"
Anyway, thank you for your review, and Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 16 2016 6:18 PM Title: A Difficult Choice
Great addition!
Author's Response:
Thank You AdamX for your comment. Ones like yours mean a lot to me that at least one person enjoys my writing. Thank you so so so much, and Have a Great Day.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2016 5:41 PM Title: A Difficult Choice
Either that, or he's the "butt" of some impractical joke.*
*Sorry! Couldn't resist. :-)
Author's Response:
You and your puns. Thanks for the review again, very much appreciated.