Date: April 13 2016 7:48 AM Title: A Bad Night
I like lost hope in ever seeing a new chapter :p good job
Date: April 12 2016 8:01 PM Title: A Bad Night
Hey all!
Sorry. Thats all I can say for myself. I am so sorry. I wanted to finish this so long ago. But one thing lead to another, and I have not. personal, family and school stuff came up, and I had to priorotize that over this. So I'm back, and Im FINISHING, this story. The next chapter was intended to be the last, and it will be. Adam and Amanda will have a conclusion. I am going to post that probaly later after I post this, and that will be it for a little while. I'm not leaving this site, not a chance. I have had some new ideas, and some free time before finals. But again, All I can say is sorry. Hope you guys will forgive me, and hope you guys will like the finale.
Thank you all for waiting for me, for reading when there was nothing new up, for leaving encouraging words, and for helping to motivate me to, ya know, finish. Thank you, and have a Great Day.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2016 10:04 PM Title: A Bad Night
Amazing story. I've been checking for the next chapter for a month and I'm really hoping for more!
Author's Response:
More shall be provided. SOrry to keep you waiting for SOOOOOO long
Date: March 30 2016 1:04 PM Title: A Bad Night
Hey i was wondering if you were going to continue the story. I was liking were it was going
Author's Response:
Yeah. Hope you don't mind if the last one is the Finale.
[Report This]Date: February 29 2016 6:33 PM Title: A Bad Night
I like the effort for your first story. Once it's finished I'll likely give thoughts in it's entirety. But one of the strongest parts is the personification of his mental psyche, the part of him that does want to enjoy what Amanda is doing to him. There back and forth exchanges really helps add depth to his struggle.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I look forward to your comprehensive analysis when I finish this.
When I was writing the story, I thought of The inner voice because I wanted Adam to have a dialouge with someone, even when he was unable to speak to Amanda.
Thanks for your review, Hope you have liked the story so far, Have a Great Day!
Date: February 25 2016 12:00 AM Title: A Bad Night
Amanda's point of view? Should be very interesting. I much look forward to it
Date: February 24 2016 7:26 PM Title: A Bad Night
Nvrmind, I figured it out. Mockasin is actually a shoe. I thought it was an adjective describing the sock. You wrote about a lot of socks so I thought this was like a special sock. Lol. Ok, that scene makes sense now.
Date: February 22 2016 4:04 PM Title: A Bad Night
This story is fantastic! The relationship between the characters is great and I love the interaction. She's a true goddess. No wonder he begins to like it at her feet. Very nice, keep on, love your style.
Author's Response:
Hey man, thank you very much for your comments and review! I appreciate that you enjoy Amanda and Adam's interactions. Ive never written a story about giantess' before, so sometimes its hard to plan in my head. But thank you very much.
I would like to just make the point, dont mistake Adam's feelings. He does not like being by Amanda's feet. He likes being near Amanda when she isnt trying to hhurt him, and he would rather not tempt her to hurt him in any manner. Thus far, he is simply being complyant to the wishes of his captor, he doesnt want to anger her. Adam is thinking of escape, but so far, he hasnt really seen a chance. If Amanda were to have worn a pair of slide off uggs today, there is a signifigant chance Adam would have tried to get away if he wasnt inside Amanda's sock. Maybe Adam will enjoy it at some point, I mean the voice in his head is pushing harder and harder each time. Its only a matter of time before Adam gets desperate or he submits.
Anyway man, thank you for your review, I appreciate it. Thank you very much, Have a Great Day!
Date: February 19 2016 2:41 AM Title: A Bad Night
Great job, i like where this is going, keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your Review. I hope that you enjoy the next chapter that's up.
I hope you are enjoying the story. Thank You, Have a Great Day!
Date: February 19 2016 1:31 AM Title: A Bad Night
I really like this story, hope to see more butt action!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. And perhaps, just maybe, there shall be more.
Again thank you for your review, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 15 2016 8:03 AM Title: A Bad Night
I head for the nearest American Express office.*
Seriously, though: nice one-shot. Thanks for sharing it...and welcome aboard!
*Sorry! The title reminded me of those old traveler check commercials with the late, great Karl Malden.
Author's Response:
Hey, thank you very much for leaving a review, I very much appreciate it. I had no idea that that was an American Express comercial. Damn thats a long time ago now. Again thank you for the review, and the interesting tidbit of information. Have a great day.
Date: February 15 2016 3:40 AM Title: A Bad Night
Kiss them toes, great story so far hope you continue it
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Im keeping a tally for how many people say what Adam should do in the comments, and your input is the first one lol. If I decide to continue this story (I might, if I do, I have it written out.) I share your sentiments, I would probaly wait a little and think, but in the end, Amanda is probaly the best bet for survival.
Anyway, thank you for your comment, and have a great day!
Date: February 15 2016 2:15 AM Title: A Bad Night
Makes me wonder, is she gentle or violent? "I will keep you warm and safe" and "You're mine now lmao" doesn't really go together, so I am really interested to find out more about this character.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review, And thank you VERY much for your critiqe. I always like it when people give me critiqes. To answer, the character Amanda is somewhere in the middle in terms of Violent tendencies or Gentle tendancies. She wouldnt try to kill the character Adam, but she isnt going to be very gentle with him. The way I thought it through, her saying "You're mine now." isnt neccesarily violent nor gentle, its more her trying to establish her dominance over the now diminutive Adam. If she were to be described as either one of the other in a black or white manner, she is probaly more gentle, but I also dont really like to think of a giantess as gentle or violent in a black and white way. I hope this answered your question, if not, i would be happy to clear it up any further if neccesary.
Also Im not sure if i will continue this. I like it as a one shot, but I do have plot planned out if i would like to continue it, just in case. If I do, I think you'll like where she goes, at least I hope so.
Anyway, sorry for the long response haha! Thank you for your review and comments, and have a great day!