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Date: February 08 2016 12:11 PM Title: The first choice
Hey there. Nice start you have here, and I appreciate the initiative. It's definitely a great thing to have choices on where will the story go.
However, I cannot see a way for it to work. It's impossible to keep giving choices to people, it would take too much time to write a sequel for each choice, again and again.
I've read what you've done. It seems like you plan on only letting one choice get a sequel, and writing endings for each other choice.
It works indeed. That's defintely a way to do it, and, to my mind, the only one if you plan to work alone on such a thing.
Yet, it might frustrate people to choose a chapter which ends that fast. If they chose it, that's because that's what interested them, yet chances are it won't continue.
And there's time. The fact that you have to write 3-4 chapters at a time makes the wait insane. People may become impatient and let go your story, even if you're doing your best.
Anyway, that's what I think about interactive stories done that way. I hope I wasn't too negative, I really do enjoy to see initiatives, it's quite uncommon, and I'd love for you to get more people to get interested in your story. I can't wait to see what's next.
Thank you. I take great pride in my stories. I do want to correct something you said in your review. The choices that are currently up are examples of what you'll come arcoss once you make those choices. Either a death, sequel starter, or the continuation of the story. This is also a pilot story to see how people will respond. I have other interactives planned, and they will have atleast two timelines that will follow each other untill the offical end of the story. Each having hundreds of other ways to end the story. What is up now is not how I plan on these to be. This is just to see if people think It's a good enough idea to work on further.