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Reviewer: Miszczu21PL Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2019 10:54 AM Title: Strange Surroundings

Dude, I have so good imaginery I was almost there.

Unfortunely only almost!

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2016 4:47 PM Title: Strange Surroundings

Good stuff, and I hear you about the chapters being longer when I write them than they are on the site...  The only thing I can think to do is now that we're into the meat of the story be extra descriptive.



Author's Response: Thank you. I will try my best to add description. If you have any tips you'd be willing to share then please go ahead.

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