Date: February 21 2016 2:57 PM Title: Out in the City
What the fuck? Keep posting this story!!!
Date: February 17 2016 6:35 AM Title: Out in the City
Hope your not done with this story
Date: February 05 2016 10:52 AM Title: Out in the City
I'm very much envisaging a "The Gods are talking now" scene, with Mom/Sis discussing what happened.
Date: February 05 2016 10:07 AM Title: Out in the City
You should make the mom force the tiny city's to give her a pedicure
Date: February 02 2016 9:42 PM Title: Out in the City
So, I love the foreshadowing with his phone being dead... I think it'd be cool if they established come kind of communication! :)
Author's Response: I agree, this story could use some awareness. The interaction would be a bit weird though, since they are are so small, but I'll try my best.
Date: January 31 2016 11:09 PM Title: Out in the City
Yup, latest addition is excellent! I really like the detail and the PoV of the tiny people. I hope the action/reaction pace carries on and it's not over in 1 or 2 chapters. This would be great to make a truly epic story out of!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to keep a good balance and also add more action, because, well, that is indeed the highlight of the story.
Date: January 31 2016 10:41 PM Title: Out in the City
Keep going need longer chapters
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm working on making them longer, but the box where you write really deceives you. The writing there looks much longer than it actually is.
Date: January 31 2016 5:42 PM Title: Out in the City
Great story keep it up
Author's Response: Thank you. I will try my best.
Date: January 31 2016 4:39 PM Title: Out in the City
Not sure where this is going but I love the idea and you write well. Super intrigued to see more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments! If I'm being honest I don't really know where this is going either. I just write what comes to mind. Sarah was really someone I added right before I wrote the story, so we'll see where it goes.
Date: January 31 2016 4:32 PM Title: Out in the City
Dear god please more feet
Author's Response: There will definitely be more to come :) I share the same feeling as you
[Report This]Date: January 30 2016 3:36 PM Title: Out in the City
Ok. I'm intrigued... :)
Author's Response: Glad to hear it :)