Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2016 8:42 PM Title: Washing Away Guilt 4'8"

Angela, delivering a right hook to Rebecca's jaw, would be the ideal solution in my book. But, then again: that sadomasochistic beeyotch would probably--and literally--get off on it!

Author's Response:

Probably. lol

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2016 3:52 PM Title: Nightmares

Brilliant double-twist! I started out thinking: "Oh, no! Not another thinly-disguised nightmare sequence. "

Then, I got to thinking: "Could it be he's skipped ahead a few days, so he can start a flashback sequence, explaining how the test-med has accelerated it's shrinkage effect?"

But, then (thankfully, for Our Hero and myself), you had him wake up. Confirming that I had been right the first time. So, just for being able to briefly fool me, I give you...five gold stars. :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  Honestly, I didn't really have a vision going into that chapter, I just threw out thoughts and took out stuff I didn't need.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2016 2:00 PM Title: Saturday's Sickness 5'4"

Cool, love the slow shrinking. Like the measuring and that he asked Angela for clothes and a ladder.
Excellent,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: aknouh Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2016 12:36 AM Title: New Clothes 5'3"

great start so far!

keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2016 7:00 PM Title: Saturday's Sickness 5'4"

It's a matriarchal conspiracy, Steve. That's how. ;-)

Author's Response:

Lol, the ideas are flowing.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2016 3:42 PM Title: Avoid Confrontation 5'7"

Not bad for a debut story. Especially as I zipped through all six of these chapters!* So, count me in as hanging around for chapter seven. :-)

Welcome aboard.



*Normally, I give chapter-by-chapter reviews.

Author's Response:

Wow!  It feels so cool to have a dedicated reader.  Thank you very much!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2016 2:24 PM Title: Realization 5'7"

Nice story. Nice plot outline. If I was him I would be very worried about Rebecca. Lots of diverse characters. How will his neighbor and her little girl treat him?
Looking forward to the next chapter,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, you may be suprised by some of the characters that step up as threats to Steve.  We shall see.

Reviewer: Gaim17 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2016 5:45 PM Title: A Matter of Chance 5'9"

Very cool story. More please!!

Author's Response:

Your wish is my command!