Date: May 06 2016 7:15 AM Title: Exploited 2'11"
A dungaree blindfold?! Oh, is there no end to this girl's fiendishness?
Okay; being serious, now. It's good to finally have you back. I almost ashamed to admit that I forgot this story. But, the way you write is so clear and concise that it didn't really take that much re-reading to refresh my memory. So, thanks for finally updating this and, once again...welcome home! :-)
Thanks a bunch Carycomic! It is great to be back! Thank you for the feedback!
Date: March 04 2016 2:22 AM Title: Amnesia 2'11"
Very cool. You describe it so well. The grabbing of her 2 fingers, the cradling of him like a baby, I can clearly picture it.
Standing in his avengers underwear, priceless.
I also greatly enjoyed Daphne saying, my eyes are up here little guy and her talk of being superior. All true.
Date: February 29 2016 4:06 AM Title: A Helping Hand 3'3"
I liked the way she bolted the door. Maybe that will be his salvation.
I can fully understand his holding his breath in the bathroom and then trying to breath quietly. Well done.
Thanks man, I was trying to be as immersive as possible with this whole sequence.
Date: February 28 2016 3:45 PM Title: A Matter of Chance 5'9"
It's been a few inches since he last saw Celeste, will we get to see her again? I really kind of want to see her reaction to Steve being even smaller.
You read my mind bro! It's coming!
Date: February 28 2016 8:51 AM Title: Purely Coincidental 3'3"
Wow! Your current prolificity is starting to make me look brain-dead by comparison.
As for this Daphne? I have to wonder if she really knows Helen. Or did she hack into Steve's cellphone?*
*Which, quite frankly, is the one real-life downside, to owning a cellphone, that outweighs all the advantages, as far as I'm permanently concerned.
Lol, Daphne was a girl from his lunch table. He started to feel uneasy around her when he started to shrink. But, you just gave me some awesome ideas for the future of this story. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: February 27 2016 12:42 AM Title: Overalls Overall 3'4"
P.S.---my condolences on the passing of your grandmother. Naturally, that took precedence over your continuation of this story! But, I also congratulate you on the height of your readership. I honestly don't know of any other author, here, who has a five-digit reader count!
Thank you very much! I am extremely grateful for everything you guys give me!
Date: February 11 2016 1:57 PM Title: Children's Clothes 3'4"
Nice assortment of clothes. I would go for the Avengers underwear also. Toddler clothes will look great on him if Angela returns to check on him. Now she has 2 kids. A big one and a little one. I assume he is still taking his medicine. How will he get out to see the world when he can barely reach the doorknob?
We shall see!
Date: February 01 2016 4:36 AM Title: Conversation at the Doorstep 3'4"
First off this is a really well written chapter. Loved it. I think you make it real when you mention SNL and Kohls. It adds realism.
Angela is right when he can barely reach the knob. Loved her picking him up and holding him on her hip. His comment about not doing it in the hallway was a good one. Reminds me of a child not wanting to be seen with his parents.
When Angels said he was like a second child he did not disagree. Basically he condones that opinion. Will Angela get to a point where she has to discipline him?Maybe she disciplines Celeste and him at the same time.
I am sure Celeste is not going to be happy when Angela talks to her about the way she treats him and uses her size advantage.
When Angela comes back at 9 will she tuck him into bed?
Thanks for the feedback!
Date: January 31 2016 11:10 PM Title: Conversation at the Doorstep 3'4"
No need for apologies, Guy, Much as we might hate to admit it, real life can rear its ugly head at any unpredictable moment. But, that being said, I will draw the line at 12 MONTHS between chapters! ;-)
As for this chapter? Angela makes a lot of sense. But, I think we all know it's going to be more dangerous, in the short term, for him to NOT to lock that door!
I'll try not to hit 12 months in between. lol Thanks for the review!