Date: December 29 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I really, really, liked this one. I especially liked how you described elements of their appearence as time went on, as opposed to the more typical 'description dump.' I also just generally liked the concept. I actually felt tense while reading the coin flip, imagined that feeling that your life would depend on something so casual. It's really powerful.
Great stuff, keep it up c:
Date: December 23 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 1